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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: I ask when I am surprised, "2500 years old!?" The employee says, "Yes, and the question is, how they could dig 300 meters' deep shaft near the mountain, what kind of tools they had, and how they could ventilate those who were digging down there?" When we are following the stream, we get into a beautiful heavenly garden. It is as large garden as a big park that the stream crosses through and ends to the farms afterward. On the East side of the park, there is a cyan dome that is a place for mausoleums of a few great Sophists. And on the North, there is a brick building that its gate faces the South.
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I inquire, my voice filled with astonishment, "2500 years old?!" The employee responds, a hint of intrigue in their voice, "Indeed, and it raises the question of how they managed to excavate a 300-meter deep shaft near the mountain. What kind of tools did they possess? And how did they ensure proper ventilation for those who toiled underground?" As we venture further along the stream, we find ourselves immersed in a breathtaking heavenly garden. Spanning the vastness of a grand park, the stream gracefully meanders through its verdant landscape, eventually reaching the neighboring farms. To the East, an exquisite cyan dome stands proudly, serving as the mausoleums for a select group of esteemed Sophists. Towards the North, a sturdy brick building, its imposing gate facing South, captures our attention.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: The employee guides us to the brick building. As soon as we enter into the building, we see the Ambassador, Colonel David, Colonel Iranmardy, and Ali are standing on the side of Gabriel, politely. And many people from all walks of life, peasants, squires, and even other nationalities, are sitting in front of an older man over 120 years old. And they are listening to a singer singing the lyrics of Rumi. The older man is sitting on a small seat of 15 cm height, so that everyone can see him.
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The employee leads us towards the impressive brick building. Stepping inside, our eyes are immediately drawn to the presence of the Ambassador, Colonel David, Colonel Iranmardy, and Ali, all standing respectfully by Gabriel's side. To our surprise, a diverse congregation fills the space. People from all walks of life, ranging from peasants to squires, and even individuals of different nationalities, have gathered. A hush falls over the room as a singer serenades them with enchanting verses from Rumi. Amidst this captivating ambiance, our attention shifts to an extraordinary figure. Seated upon a low stool, barely 15 centimeters high, is an elderly man well over the age of 120. His elevated position allows everyone in the room a clear view of his venerable presence.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Gabriel says to Carol and me, "Go ahead and introduce yourselves to him." We are so amazed at the atmosphere and greatness of the older man that we accept to do so without reasoning. The older man invites us to sit down close to him. After an hour, the gathering is over, and the crowd starts leaving the session. Then the older man summons Gabriel and his companion to come close and then asks Carol first and then me, "Who are you and where you have come from to Persia?" Colonel Iranmardy wants to answer, but the older man points at him to stay silent. I want to answer for Carol, when the older man stops me and says again, Carol herself explains. Carol answers, "I am American," while she is crying without knowing why. When it is my turn, I want to answer but a million answers rush to my head from my early childhood up to now. I suddenly find the kind face of my grandfather in front of me, telling me what to say. Then I answer, "I am American." Then the older man turns to Gabriel and says, "I appreciate your efforts, this couple and the rest of you, for saving the Earth and life on the planet."
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Gabriel instructs us with a nod, "Go ahead and introduce yourselves to him." The awe-inspiring atmosphere and the profound presence of the elderly man leave Carol and me entranced, rendering us unable to think logically. Despite our astonishment, we oblige and approach him as he cordially invites us to take a seat nearby. An hour passes, and the gathering draws to a close, prompting the dispersal of the crowd. As the room empties, the venerable man beckons Gabriel and his companion to step closer. He then directs his gaze towards Carol, and later towards me, inquiring, "Who are you, and what brings you to Persia?" Colonel Iranmardy seems eager to respond, yet the older man gestures for him to remain silent. Just as I am about to answer on Carol's behalf, the aged figure interrupts, signaling for her to provide her own response. Overwhelmed by emotions she cannot quite grasp, Carol tearfully replies, "I am American." When my turn arrives, a whirlwind of memories from my childhood to the present floods my mind, causing confusion. However, I am unexpectedly met with the gentle face of my late grandfather, guiding me in my response. With conviction, I echo Carol's words, "I am American." The older man then turns to face Gabriel, a tone of gratitude coloring his words, "I commend your endeavors, as well as the efforts of this couple and the rest of you, for saving Earth and preserving life on this planet."
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Gabriel bows down so politely that I have never seen that of Gabriel before. Then the older man calls up Colonel Iranmardy, Colonel David, and Ali closer kindly and thanks them again. And then he tells me, "John, the Knight of the Fourth Universe." I suddenly start crying spontaneously, as if someone is pulling me out of my body, and feel that all the stress and pain in my soul from childhood until today are leaving me quickly. The older man continues, "John, you will be here on Earth for the next ten years, and then you will ascend to the fifth universe. "Carol, you will live longer than John, to raise your son and bring him up a brave young man. He brings more peace and prosperity to this world. Now, go and enjoy your life by serving your family, friends, and community. May God have mercy on you all."
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Gabriel gracefully bows, a display of respect I have never witnessed from him before. The elderly man, with kindness in his voice, beckons Colonel Iranmardy, Colonel David, and Ali to come closer, expressing his gratitude towards them once more. Turning his attention towards me, he utters my name, "John, the Knight of the Fourth Universe." A surge of overwhelming emotions overtakes me, causing tears to flow uncontrollably. It feels as though an external force is releasing the burdens of stress and pain that have plagued my soul since childhood. In a steady voice, the older man continues, his words resonating deeply within me, "John, you will remain on Earth for the next ten years, after which you shall ascend to the fifth universe." A profound shift occurs within me as his words penetrate my being. The weight I have carried for so long begins to dissipate, leaving me with a newfound sense of peace and liberation. Addressing Carol, he turns his attention to her, affirming, "Carol, you will outlive John, nurturing and raising your son into a courageous young man who will bring even greater peace and prosperity to this world." With a final expression of blessing, he encourages us to embrace the joys of life by serving our families, friends, and communities. He concludes with a heartfelt invocation, "May God's mercy be upon you all." In that moment, we are left standing, profoundly moved by the words of the wise elder, each carrying a renewed purpose and a resolve to fulfill our destinies.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Carol and I are sitting on the front porch of our living room on the farm and watching our five years old son, Patrick, who is playing joyfully with his dog, giggling and shouting. I have got promoted and now and am in charge of part of the analytical office of CIA, stationed at Missoula, Montana. The office works under the provision of the US Government, publishing books for Asian children. This office has more than twenty different analysts that they read whatever is going to be published in the Middle East. Even those that are under the scissors of censorship. And they analyze whatever is happening there, now and then.
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Carol and I find ourselves seated on the front porch of our farmhouse, basking in the warm glow of the setting sun. Our gazes fixate on our spirited five-year-old son, Patrick, who joyfully engages with his furry companion, their playful antics filling the air with laughter and exuberant shouts. In recent times, I have been honored with a promotion. As the newly appointed head of the analytical division at the CIA's office in Missoula, Montana, I find myself entrusted with a crucial role. The office operates under the directive of the United States Government, with a particular focus on creating literature catered to the minds of young readers in Asia. This sophisticated establishment boasts a team of over twenty diverse analysts, each tasked with scrutinizing and digesting literary works originating from the Middle East. These include materials that have encountered the blade of censorship. These dedicated individuals continuously monitor the ever-changing landscape of the region, providing crucial insights and analysis on its unfolding events. As I sit beside Carol, I reflect on the significance of our roles within this intricate web of intelligence, understanding the weight of responsibility that lies upon our shoulders.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Carol is happy with having me around, and the job is like a vacation for me. We make good earning, more than our needs, and even we gave our home in Long Island for rent and moved permanently to our place on her parent's farm on the right side of the main house. Carol believes in what the older man had told us four years ago in the northeast of Persia. And she knows that I will only be around her for the next six years, on Earth. She tries to enjoy every second of her life with the family, although she has her worries from time to time. She also knows that I get upset sometimes, but she does not know what I'm feeling, or if there is something else in the back of my head that bothers me from time to time.
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Carol finds contentment in my presence, and my new job feels like a rejuvenating respite. Our earnings exceed our needs, allowing us to lease our home in Long Island and permanently settle on her parents' farm, nestled to the right of the main house. Deeply rooted in her belief in the prophetic words of the wise elder we encountered in the northeast of Persia four years prior, Carol understands that my time by her side on Earth is limited to a mere six years. With this knowledge, she cherishes every moment spent with our family, savoring the joys of togetherness. Despite occasional worries that enter her mind, she embraces life wholeheartedly. However, Carol remains unaware of the sentiments that occasionally weigh upon me, unable to discern the inner workings of my thoughts or the occasional burdens that occupy my mind.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: The fact is that I feel like that planet Earth is too small for me sometimes. It's very tight, just like wearing an undersized shirt. I feel suffocated, especially when I am at work and have to deal with the bureaucratic tasks.
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In truth, there are moments when I find myself enveloped by a sense of constriction upon the planet we call Earth. It is as if the world around me has become too constricting, akin to donning a shirt that is several sizes too small. The weight of this overwhelming sensation often stifles me, particularly when I am engulfed in the realm of tedious bureaucratic duties at my workplace.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: I'm behind my desk in the office and reading a report that needs to be prepared and sent to D.C. All of a sudden, I feel someone is watching me. When I look up, I see Gabriel is standing right on my side, watching over my shoulder, with a friendly of smile on his face. I stand up unconsciously and say, "You are six years early?" Gabriel smiles and says, "I am not Azrael (Angel of Death) and am not even here to accompany you to the fifth universe." I say, "I'm in debt to whom, for your visit again?" Gabriel immediately says, "Always God, and only God." I am wonderfully happy about seeing Gabriel and I hug him tightly; it is like I'm hugging my grandfather. And then I ask him, "What has brought you in here?" My secretary, who is a close friend of Carol, notices me talking to myself, and she thinks; Carol