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“edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: I am am” (1 conversations)
10 turns Nov 25, 2023 at 7:09 PM UTC Iran , Tehran
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: I am amazed at how precise is the justice system of God. And thinking what would be my future after death although I know that I supposed to go to the fifth universe. Gabriel immediately says, "You should never despair of the mighty mercy of God and remember that you are going to the fifth world later, and there are chances for you to rise to higher and higher positions." Gabriel is about to leave me when he adds, "There are still some missions you might voluntarily be interested to take part in them at the second and third universe that I let you know when their times come. Moreover, remember that you have only experienced a tiny portion of life and a few personalities of existence in these gigantic universes."
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I am astounded by the impeccable precision of God's justice system. As I contemplate my impending future after death, my understanding of being destined for the fifth universe fuels my curiosity. With an air of reassurance, Gabriel interjects, emphasizing the unwavering mercy of the divine. He reminds me that my journey to the fifth world holds countless opportunities for advancement, urging me never to lose hope. Just as Gabriel is preparing to depart, he adds, "There are other missions that may pique your interest in the second and third universes. When the time comes, I will inform you of these endeavors. Furthermore, keep in mind that you have only scratched the surface of life's vast expanse, acquainted with but a mere fraction of the countless complexities that dwell within these majestic universes."
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: When I get home, Carol is gardening as usual in front of the main house; this is her private garden as big as 2000 square feet on her father's farm of 2000 acres. I get off the new space car that the agency has leased for me recently and then say hello, warmly, to Carol. Carol smiles, and says, "Well, it seems that you had a good day." I say, "Well, I had a small chat with Gabriel on the way back home." "Beautiful," she says. "What has happened between you two?" I say, "Well, I think, there are still some trainings left for me to take." Carol asks me, surprisingly, "What kind of training. Is it dangerous?" I answer, "I do not think so, he didn't say so."
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As I arrive at the main house, Carol can be found engrossed in her usual gardening routine. Her personal sanctuary, spanning a vast 2000 square feet, sits within the expansive confines of her father's 2000-acre farm. Carefully stepping out of the recently leased space car provided by the agency, I warmly greet Carol. A smile graces her face as she responds, "Seems like you had a good day." Returning her smile, I mention, "I had a brief conversation with Gabriel on the way home." With genuine curiosity, Carol inquires, "Interesting! What transpired between the two of you?" Contemplating for a moment, I reply, "It appears there are still some training sessions I have yet to undergo." Carol's surprise is evident as she questions, "What sort of training? Is it dangerous?" Shaking my head, I reassure her, "I believe not. Gabriel did not indicate any potential hazards."
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: We go to the main house for dinner. Carol's mother tells me that Grandpa has left you a message to call him as soon as you get home. I ask, "He didn't say what?" Carol's mom says no, he just said call him. I get curious and immediately call my parents' home where my grandpa lives. Grandpa answers the phone and says, "We are planning to come to the farm for the coming weekend." I am more curious now than before I called him. I tell Carol, "They are coming here, but how come they said nothing to your mom." Carol smiles and says, "Well, you know Grandpa. He wanted to tell you personally that he is coming for you, and possibly there is something concerning your meeting with his highness Gabriel today." I nod as a sign of acknowledgment. But I still have my doubts about what Carol said. I am reluctant to call my grandpa again and ask him about his strange phone call, whereas I know that there should be some reasons behind what I will find out later on the coming weekend.
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We gather together in the main house for dinner. Carol's mother shares with me that my grandfather has left a message, urgently requesting me to call him as soon as I arrive home. Naturally inquisitive, I inquire, "Did he mention the reason for his call?" Carol's mother shakes her head, indicating that no specific details were mentioned, only to call him immediately. Intrigued by the mystery surrounding the message, I decide to waste no time and promptly dial the number, reaching the residence where my grandparents reside. On the other end, my grandfather's voice greets me, informing, "We have made plans to visit the farm this upcoming weekend." This revelation only serves to deepen my curiosity. I share with Carol, "They are coming here, but it's strange that they didn't inform your mother." Offering an understanding smile, Carol explains, "Well, you know Grandpa. He wanted to personally inform you about their visit, and there might be something he wishes to discuss regarding your encounter with his highness, Gabriel." I nod, acknowledging her words. Despite this, a seed of doubt lingers within me concerning Carol's explanation. Reluctant to call my grandfather once again to inquire about the cryptic phone call and unsure of what secrets await me during the upcoming weekend, I deliberate internally, knowing there must be a valid reason for the enigma I am about to uncover.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Today is Saturday, and Grandpa and my parents have arrived here on the farm the day before, on Friday afternoon. I have not yet got a chance to talk with my grandpa. After breakfast, Grandpa asks me to come to his room and starts immediately talking, "I know that his holiness Gabriel might send you to the second and third universes for a mission. I called to make sure that you will be at home for the weekend." Grandpa continues, "As you may know, the priority in the first universe where we are, is self. Meaning that everyone is struggling to save herself or himself although, in the other universes, life is going on the same, and humans have supremacy over other species; but the rules are not the same as in here. "For instance, the priorities in the second universe and the third, the fourth, the fifth, the sixth, and the seventh are different."
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It is a Saturday morning, and both my parents and Grandpa arrived at the farm the previous afternoon. Due to the hectic nature of their arrival, I haven't had the chance to converse with my grandfather yet. Following breakfast, Grandpa beckons me to his quarters, wasting no time as he begins to speak, "I am aware that his holiness, Gabriel, may be sending you on a mission to the second and third universes. Hence, I called to ensure you would be available this weekend." Grandpa continues, "As you may already know, the first universe, our current realm, places utmost importance on self-preservation. Here, every individual struggles to save themselves. However, in the other universes, life continues similarly, with humanity holding a position of dominance over other species. But, the rules governing these realms differ significantly." "For instance," he explains, "the priorities within the second and third universes, as well as the fourth, fifth, sixth, and seventh, diverge significantly from those in our own universe."
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: I do not understand a word of what my grandpa said a few seconds ago. At the same time, Gabriel appears and says, "Well I preferred your grandfather fully explain where you are going and what are the rules in the other universes." "However, it is quite clear to me, you have not yet perceived how the system works. It's difficult to understand, of course. When you live in the First World, on the planet Earth, the reflection of the six different rules of survival in the six worlds above, affects you plus the laws of the first universe." Grandpa continues. Then Gabriel says, "Be ready to come with me to the second universe for a mission of forty years, and then you are to practice life in there until you understand completely what we said." "Moreover; you should not worry about the length of your time that will live there. As you have experienced before, it would only take a few minutes of your lifetime on Earth," he continues.
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My grandpa's words leave me utterly perplexed, and before I can make sense of it all, Gabriel materializes beside us. "I would have preferred your grandfather to fully elaborate on your destination and the regulations governing the other universes," Gabriel comments. "Notably, it is abundantly clear to me that you have yet to grasp how the system operates. Understandably, it is no easy task," Gabriel continues, his voice tinged with understanding. "As an inhabitant of the First World, residing on planet Earth, the influence of the six distinct sets of survival regulations in the realms above, along with the laws of the first universe, impact you." Grandpa resumes speaking, conveying Gabriel's words, "Prepare yourself to journey alongside me into the second universe. You will undertake a mission lasting forty years, allowing you ample time to acquaint yourself with life there until complete comprehension is achieved." Gabriel interjects once more, reassuring me, "Additionally, you need not fret about the length of time you will spend in that realm. As you have previously experienced, what may appear as years there will merely consume mere minutes of your life on Earth."
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Immediately after Gabriel finishes his speech, I fall on the couch just like someone who is unconscious or under drugs. Then I feel, I am swelling like a balloon, while I am watching the farm from the above and going up farther from Earth. And then we go through the firewall between the first and second universes. I feel my astral body is burning for a few moments and then suddenly find myself as a newborn child in a small but very well-educated family. I look at myself and feel sad first, and then it is funny that I find myself as a thirty-six years old mature man in the body of an infant a few seconds later.
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As Gabriel's words reach their conclusion, an overwhelming sensation engulfs me, causing me to collapse onto the couch, resembling someone unconscious or influenced by potent drugs. In this strange state, I witness an extraordinary occurrence: my body begins to swell, resembling a balloon, while my vantage point shifts higher and farther above the Earth, gazing down at the farm. Passing through the firewall that separates the first and second universes, an unsettling burn engulfs my astral body for a fleeting moment. Abruptly, I find myself reborn into a small yet intellectually accomplished family. Gazing at my infant form, a sense of melancholy washes over me, swiftly replaced by the absurdity of being a mature, thirty-six-year-old man encapsulated within the vessel of an innocent child, all within a matter of seconds.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Gabriel appears immediately to me and says, "Say nothing, or even don't blink that could reveal who you are, otherwise you might ruin the purpose of your mission." My new mom comes close to me when talking to her husband, says, "Rob, we have picked out the best genes in the incubator." "Yes, I believe so, this baby will have a wonderful future," says Rob.
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Without delay, Gabriel manifests before me, cautioning, "Remain silent and refrain from any actions or revealing glances that could potentially divulge your true identity. Doing so may jeopardize the mission's purpose." My new mother draws near as she converses with her husband, uttering in an excited tone, "Rob, we have carefully selected the finest genes from the incubator." Rob, her husband, responds with confidence, "Indeed, I wholeheartedly believe this child will have a remarkable future ahead."
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: I grow up as a brilliant student in my school and understand gradually that the priority in this universe is family, which is the same as race. Every person in each community, as a school or family, helps other members of the family for improvement of the entire family. I am smarter than the average of my classmates, since I am more experienced spiritually (the Knight of the Fourth Universe). I help some students in my class, regarding their syllabus and subjects, until the time, they can sync with the rest of the students. There is no competition among members of each race (family), but there are some who are more qualified in their professions and kindly are ready to help others in their family.