How could you rewrite the following in half as many words?: No-one knows that Dave (26) has been conditioned by his unpopular & overweight office colleague Pat (52) over several hypnotic sessions (to get him to agree at first, she told him it was a meditation thing) to happily drop into a super-obedient daze everytime she begins a perfunctory, tossed-off induction, which he doesn't consciously remember. In this script (kinky), afterwork drinks: Dave & his work colleagues are drinking wine, drunk & laughing. Time for smug fat Pat to show off her footslave to their workmates, who are astonished how easily Pat did it to Dave.