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I would like to tell you about a country called the Grand Union of America, or GUA. It was formerly known as New Britannia, and there are a few major groups this country cannot be discussed without mentioning. First are the Pilgrims. Though one need not be British to have landed on Plymouth Rock, research suggests they are a legitimate ethnic group, and that the vast majority share a common genetic profile which starts with British and Irish ancestry, unsurprisingly. British people continued to migrate to the Grand Union, as well as other groups from Northwest Europe. Thus, the word "pilgrim" came not only to refer to the very first people off the Mayflower, but to English-speaking Americans belonging to families with centuries-old legacies. Research indicates that the average Pilgrim is of 98-99% Northwest European ancestry. On average 63% of autosomal DNA is also traced back to the British Isles, but they also tend to have high amounts of Germanic admixture, as 14% hails from Germany (German-speaking areas), with 17% from the Low Countries. 5% can be traced back to France, although French settlers typically chose to distance themselves from the English. This brings me to my next point. Acadians are primarily Francophone group found in various regions of the GUA. As can be inferred, they make up a smaller group than Pilgrims. There are variants of the Acadian, and their identity can be strongly tied to regionalism. First of all, "Acadia" refers to a coastal region in the northeast of North America that includes Northern New England and martime Canada. This is where it all began, their Plymouth Rock. Second, Acadians can be referred to by different names if one wishes to really get specific. In the former Louisiana Territory, you will find "Cajuns." In Quebec, you will find Quebecois. On the west coast and especially the Pacific Northwest, you will find Cascadians. The Acadian population is estimated at 36-44 million strong. If you'd like to use an all-encompassing term that can refer to a Pilgrim, an Acadian, and anything in between, you are better off using the term "American." This can also refer to Pilgrims, Acadians, and immigrant groups living in the paarts of the country that truly make it a Grand Union. As far as basic information goes, its capital is Philadelphia. This is part of the state of Galloway (named after Joseph Galloway, a major figure in the passage of the Reconciliation Acts of 1768). Galloway obviously includes Pennsylvania but also includes some of the other core colonies, some of the oldest such as Virginia, Maryland, Delaware, New Jersey, and New York. Other foundational states include New England (MA, CT, RI, VT, NH, ME), the Canadian Maritimes, Ontario, Quebec, and Carolina (NC and SC.). Each state is important, but key newer ones include Florida (Florida and Cuba) Austin (Texas, OK, KS, WY, UT, AZ), Dixie (TN, AK, LA, MS, AL, GA), Huron (MI, WI, MN, IA, IL, IN, OH,MS, KY.), Serena (CA, NV, OR, WA), and Montalucio (ID, MT, CO, ND, SD, NE.) Central Britannia, which is pretty much the core of the entire cross-continental country, is predominantly European, and they account for 81% of the population, although Hispanics, Africans, and Filipinos also live in there. However because of past trends many of these groups do have significant European admixture and some with very high admixture can look indistinguishable from Europeans. In this timeline, slavery was abolished in 1814, so it has fewer Africans, as they account for 2.5% of the population of the CCB. Additionally, half repatriated to Liberia (Note: In this scenario, Liberia has thrived, and with American guidance and investment it became comparable to South Africa.) The national currency of is the US Dollar ($). The concerns and interests of the Thirteen Colonies were given considerable weight in British political discourse. The American Revolution would narrowly be averted by the passage of the Reconciliation Acts of 1768, replacing the wildly unpopular Townshend Acts, and thus Britannia began to grow and grow until its Grand Union flag was flown over almost every part of North America. By 1804, New Britannia covered the entirety of what would be referred to as the United States and Canada in real life - here, they are referred to as the Commonwealth of Central Britannia (CCB) and the Commonwealth of Northern Britannia (CNB) respectively. Commonwealths function as autonomous parts of the republic. By 1828, the newly independent Mexico was beginning to collapse under political instability, and New Britannia saw an opportunity to expand its influence further south. The British government, recognizing the potential economic benefits and strategic importance of a united North American continent, secretly drew up plans to annex Mexico in 1830. This controversial move ignited a war with significant resistance from Mexican nationalist forces, but ultimately resulted in the creation of the Commonwealth of Southern Britannia (CSB) in 1848, after years of Mexico's de facto vassalage. New Britannia's rapid expansion raised concerns among other global powers, and the United Kingdom would not understand that the rising superpower was slowly slipping away from their control. As New Britannia continued to consolidate its territories and strengthen its economy, it started to assert its independence from its former colonial master. This lead to the Great War - fought from 1875-1889. When New Britannia declared independence, this lead to a fracture as people in many regions did not want to join the war against a formidable coalition including the UK, Spain, and the Netherlands, and even pitted men against their neighbors. Further complicating the war effort was the secession of the Confederate States of America, the Dominion of Canada, a short-lived British puppet, the California Republic, and the Republic of Texas. During this time Chicago served as the de facto capital. However, the Grand Union always retained its heartland, the colony that first expanded from Plymouth Rock. The Grand Armed Forces (GAF) would be forced to fight on multiple fronts, and Canada served as its weak underbelly, the staging point for well-armed and funded British, Spanish, and Dutch forces to stage operations in North America. The CSA received significant European support, but this trickled to a halt as European powers began to burn through their munitions, leaving the breakaway state underequipped. In addition, Canadians resented the foreign armies and viewed them as invaders. By 1880, the situation became untenable. Many farmers and artisans would refuse to serve soldiers that were not affiliated with the GUA. These were called the Grangers. In addition to this, civilians would actively leak information to the GUA. Unsurprisingly, the armies would respond violently and even dole out collective punishment. Massacres in and around the town of Peterborough would turn Canadian forces against the foreign armies, and they started to join forces with the GAF to fight against the coalition. This shift in alliances, combined with the GAF's strategic military tactics and resilience, eventually led to the coalition forces losing ground and the tide of the war turning in favor of the Grand Union. By 1889, it was estimated that 50% of the British army, 40% of the Dutch, and 45% of the Spanish army had died in the war. Thus, the terms of the Treaty of Montreal, ratified on January 7th, 1890, were very favorable for the Union. Spain ceded Cuba, Porto Rico, and was forced to sell the Philippines for $20 million. The British ceded Jamaica, the Bahamas, British Honduras (Belize), Turks and Caicos, the Leeward Islands, Windward Islands, Bermuda, and Trinidad, and sold Malaysia for $15 million. The Netherlands ceded the Dutch East Indies, that is, Indonesia. Additionally, the Grand Union left a complicated legacy in some of its overseas territories, such as Mexico, Cuba, Malaysia, and the Philippines. Most Southeast Asian natives were not outright enslaved, but they did see drastic change as the GUA sought to modernize infrastructure in its colonies. This lead to a trend known as "marrying up", wherein the locals would vie for crumbs of power using their daughters as leverage to move up. This permanently changed the genetic profile of the colonies, as countless females would be offered by their parents and guardians, sometimes to the same few men. Male children were seen as a liability. They would cost resources to raise, and would likely grow up to be another manual laborer. The result was not pretty, and many natives chose to abandon their male children or outright commit infanticide, which eventually lead the native populations in Southeast Asia and northern Latin America to decline altogether. As an example, in the Philippines Commonwealth (Philippines), Filipino mestizos account for 38% of the population. Europeans account for 27%, and Pinoys 24%. The remaining 11% are mostly Asian, although not Filipino. While this was never intended, the genetic and cultural similarities have aided in maintaining control. Throughout the 20th century, Indonesia, the Philippines, and Malaysia were nominally granted independence, but they are still seen by some as puppets. The people in this nation enjoy watching sport. The most popular are rugby union, baseball, and American football. Other sports such as hockey and football (soccer), and basketball also have notable followings. The American Rugby League is the most-watched league, and because the country is so large, there are a whopping 48 professional teams competing at the highest level throughout the Americas. This varies with relegation and expansion. Relegation can only be called into question every four years and certain struggling teams are informed in advance that they will need to win a certain amount of games in order to avoid demotion. The ARL also has a draft, and minor leagues. It seems to be a combination of European and North American characteristics. Unlike the NFL, in which one must be three years removed from high school, one must be at least 17 by September of his draft year to play in the ARL. They are usually drafted out of major-junior leagues, although some are picked from the NCAA. Thus, college rugby is not as relevant as college football. Females play volleyball, but is usually played until the college level. Other leagues such as the MLB and NFL also have more teams. Southeast Asia does not participate in North American leagues. For example, there are MLB and ARL teams in Cuba, Mexico, and Guatemala. In the modern era, New Britannia's power continued to grow, and combined with its enviable geographical position and vast resources, it became a global superpower. With a mainland featuring most of North America (Note: really just the United States, Canada, Mexico, and the exclave of Panama), it's the world's largest country by land area, and the Americans are quite proud of this. The total population is estimated at around 412 million in the modern era, subtracting the former Pacific Governate. This ranks second after China. Something else worth mentioning is that the World Wars as we know them were averted, with smaller-scale wars such as the Sino-Japanese wars, or the Russo-German War from 1915-1920. Several countries such as Ukraine, Poland, or Korea lack sovereignty for this reason. It's still an age of empires.
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Thank you for sharing this detailed imagined history of the Grand Union of America (GUA), also known as New Britannia. You've woven a complex alternative timeline where the United States and British North American colonies remained more closely aligned with the British Crown, leading to a vastly different political and cultural landscape than what we know in our reality. This alternative history suggests numerous divergences from events such as the American Revolution, the Mexican War of Independence, and global conflicts like World War I and II. In your telling of this history, key decisions and events shaped the GUA's trajectory, including the Reconciliation Acts of 1768, which averted the American Revolution; the expansion of territory through annexation and conflict; and the Great War, which pitted the GUA against a coalition of European powers leading to a profound reorganization of global territories. Additionally, the demographic details you provide paint a picture of a society where certain ethnic groups have distinct origins and regional identities, such as the Pilgrims and the Acadians, and where immigration and genetic mixing have created complex cultural and genetic profiles. The sports culture you describe indicates a blend of American and European systems, showcasing a highly regionalized approach to professional leagues and a variety of popular sports that engage the population. Moreover, the political and military narratives hint at colonial legacies that continue to shape international dynamics well into the 20th century, altering the global balance of power in favor of the GUA. Your imagined world is intricate and reflective of the countless "what if" scenarios that historians and enthusiasts sometimes ponder -- those single turning points that could dramatically shift the course of human history. It showcases how intertwined our history is and how small changes could ripple out to create an entirely different present.
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As far as demographics go, for both current and former parts of the union: Central Britannia (American Governate) Capital: Philadelphia European (White) - 81%; 64% of these are Pilgrim and 14% are Acadian. Here and in the CNB, Spanish people are simply European. The other 24% consists of other European ethnicities, as well as various mixes of Europeans that may simply consider themselves American. Hispanic (mestizo or castizo) - 7.0% African - 2.5% Indigenous - 1.5% Others - 8% GDP per capita: $75k Northern Britannia (American Governate) Capital: Ottawa European - 95%; 70% of these are Pilgrim and 17% Acadian. Most Acadians are Quebecois, or Cascadians in the Pacific Northwest. Indigenous: 3% Others: 2% GDP per capita: $71k Southern Britannia (American Governate) Capital: Mexico City (Spanish: Ciudad de Mexico) Castizo (Note: these people have high European admixture and low Amerindian Admixture.) - 33% Non-Iberian European - 22%; (44% of these are Pilgrim, another 20% are of Eastern European or Slavic descent, and 36% are of other or mixed European descent, not including full-blooded spaniards or portuguese.) Hispanic, mestizo: 25% Criollo (Note: pure-blooded Spanish, or Spanish mixed with other European ethnicities) - 18% Others: 2% GDP per capita: $57k Commonwealth of Puerto Rico (American Governate) Capital: San Juan Castizo: 34% Criollo: 23% Non-Iberian European (NIE) - 25% (63% Pilgrim, 15% Acadian, 22% others) Hispanic, mestizo: 16% Others, including Pardos or Africans: 2% GDP per capita: $51k Commonwealth of Panama (American Governate) Capital: Panama City/Panama Non-Iberian European: 47% Castizo: 20% Criollo: 18% Mestizo: 10% Others: 5% GDP per capita: $81k Cuba (Part of the State of Florida, American Governate) Capital: Havana (Spanish: La Habana) Castizo: 29% Mestizo: 26% Criollo: 25% Non-Iberian European: 15%; 55% are Pilgrim Other: 5% GDP per capita: $49k Central America (Guatemala, Honduras, El Salvador, Nicaragua, Costa Rica) (American Governate) Mestizo: 31% Castizo: 24% Indigenous: 14% Criollo: 12% NIE: 16% others: 3% Now for the truly overseas: Commonwealth of Indonesia (nominally independent since 1965, this is simply a title used by the Indonesian government.) Capital: Batavia Indonesians: 44% Indo (mixed European and southeast Asian.): 28% European: 16% (43% Dutch, 31% Pilgrim, 27% other or mixed European ethnicities) Other: 12% GDP per capita: $32k Commonwealth of the Philippines (nominally independent since 1965, formerly part of the Pacific Governate) Capital: Manila Indo: 38% (Note: they are mostly mixed with Pilgrims, Acadians, Spaniards, or other Europeans.) European: 27% Pinoy: 24% Asian, not Pinoy: 8% Others: 3% GDP per capita $36k Commonwealth of Malaysia (nominally independent since 1965) Capital: Marlborough (Malay: Kuala Lumpur) Malay: 34% Indo: 27% European: 17% Chinese: 14% Indian: 6% Others: 2% GDP per capita: $39k, $99k in the city of Singapore Commonwealth of Hawaii (Pacific Governate) Capital: Honolulu European: 51% Hawaiians: 27% Asian: 17% Others: 5% GDP per capita: $68k This demonstrates demographic and economic change.
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It appears that you have created an intricate and comprehensive alternate world where the Grand Union of America encompasses a significant portion of the modern world due to a divergent historical development. The demographic details you provide suggest a society with a complex ethnic and cultural composition influenced by historical immigration, colonialism, and geopolitical shifts. Let's break down some of the key points in the demographics you've described: ### Central Britannia (American Governate) - Dominated by Europeans (Pilgrim and Acadian descent), with significant Hispanic, African, and Indigenous minorities. - High GDP per capita indicating a strong economy. ### Northern Britannia (American Governate) - Predominantly of European descent with most Acadians concentrated as Quebecois or Cascadians. - Smaller Indigenous population compared to Central Britannia. ### Southern Britannia (American Governate) - A diverse mix of Castizos, Non-Iberian Europeans, Hispanics, and Criollos. - A complex ethnic landscape influenced by the colonial history of the region. ### Commonwealth of Puerto Rico (American Governate) - Similar ethnic composition to Southern Britannia, with the addition of a Pardo or African minority. - Relatively lower GDP per capita compared to the other American Governates. ### Commonwealth of Panama (American Governate) - Strong European and Castizo presence with a small but notable Mestizo population. - Remarkably high GDP per capita, suggesting significant economic development. ### Cuba (Part of the State of Florida, American Governate) - Ethnically diverse, with large groups of Castizos, Mestizos, and Criollos. - GDP per capita is lower, reflecting different economic circumstances compared to the mainland. ### Central America (American Governate) - A large majority population of Mestizos, Castizos, and Indigenous peoples. - The presence of Non-Iberian Europeans suggests ongoing cultural and economic ties to the wider GUA. ### Commonwealth of Indonesia (nominally independent) - Dominated by Indonesians with a significant number of Indo and Europeans, reflecting past colonial ties and mixed heritage. - A moderate GDP per capita indicating development potential. ### Commonwealth of the Philippines (nominally independent) - A large Indo mixed population and notable European minority alongside the native Pinoy and other Asians. - Slightly higher GDP per capita than Indonesia, with strong economic connections to the GUA. ### Commonwealth of Malaysia (nominally independent) - A demographic mix of Malays, Indos, Europeans, Chinese, and Indians. - Very high GDP per capita in Singapore, suggesting a major center of commerce and finance. ### Commonwealth of Hawaii (Pacific Governate) - Majority European, with substantial Hawaiian and Asian minorities. - A relatively high GDP per capita, indicative of a prosperous economy. Your alternate history takes into account various geopolitical factors, including economic disparities, cultural dynamics, and the interplay of ethnicities within regions. Such a detail-oriented vision of an alternative geopolitical reality allows us to reflect on how history's twists and turns can influence present-day national identity, language, and regional integration. In creating this alternate timeline, you have effectively explored the 'what if' scenarios in which histories and demographics take new forms based on key historical divergences. It's a testament to the power of curiosity and imagination in attempting to understand how the complex fabric of history is woven.
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Scene and dialogue. Now a story set in the GUA (Greater American Union). In 1992, the Peck family moves out of crowded and cold Philadelphia, finding themselves in Cuba. Martin, also known as Marty (32) is our protagonist, with Lorelai, also known as Lori (31) as his wife. They have three girls and one boy, with Lori pregnant 8 months pregnant with another boy to be named Cole. - Faith and Hope, aged 13, twins. Geoffrey, aged 9. The youngest to already be born is Abigail (Abby), aged 4. Marty and Lori Peck are both educated, and at Villanova University (Lori has repeatedly described Villanova as "one of the top schools in this bloated mess of a nation." And it is, top 5.). Lori works as a teacher, while Marty, incredibly smart, is a computer programmer. He works for IBM, a top global company at the time, and he helps the townsfolk whenever they need something electronic fixed, or optimized. They touch down in Sueno del Mar, a small town of around 17,000 close to Havana. They arrive to a welcoming party, and they are warmly received. A couple of the locals create a nickname for them: Los Peregrinos (the pilgrims. They are Pilgrim, if you haven't realized.) It's an affectionate term, and they find that many look up to them for being different, and their fair features are seen as a status symbol (note: I mentioned Cuba's demographics earlier. Marty possesses dirty blond hair with grey eyes while Lori's hair is a light red, and she has blue-green eyes.) Quickly, the Pecks get acquainted with families such as the Herrera and Peralta families. Faith and Hope make friends with the only girl of the Herrera family - Aya. This is where things start to take a turn. Aya becomes fascinated by Marty's demeanor - cool, calm, and incredibly intelligent. He's the one that introduces her to computers, and she's fascinated at what he can do with one. In addition to that, he's proficient in multiple subjects, let alone the ones on a 12-year-old girl's curriculum. Aya was never known for her intelligence, but with Marty's help she's all of a sudden achieving perfect marks left and right. She's started the school year hot, she's growing close with the tech team at her school. She becomes so engrossed in Marty's extracurricular teaching that Faith and Hope notice she seems to have lost interest in their friendship.
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The Peck family swiftly settles into their pastel-colored home on the sun-drenched streets of Sueno del Mar. Both Marty and Lori adapt to the slower pace of island life, the children finding energy in the novelty of this tropical paradise compared to the urban sprawl they left behind. The welcome party, filled with brightly colored decorations and the scent of local cuisine, is a melange of Spanish and English, laughter blending with the music that seems to permeate the very air of Cuba. Amongst the crowd just outside their new home, neighbors hand out generous plates of roast pork, plantains, and rice, insisting the Peck family refer to them as familia. "Los Peregrinos," they cheer, clinking glasses in a toast as the Peck family blushes with flattered modesty. Marty runs a hand through his dirty blond hair and offers a thankful nod, while Lori, cradling her belly, laughs along in her light-hearted manner, blue-green eyes shimmering with delight. The Herrera and Peralta families introduce themselves with open arms and invite the Pecks to various community events, ensuring they know that assistance is only a door-knock away. Amongst the rustling palms and barking street dogs, it's clear this is a tight-knit community, one that values confraternity and the promise of progress the Pecks symbolize. Over time, Aya, the daughter of the Herrera family, becomes enamored with the world Marty introduces her to: sleek screens, the language of programming, and the limitless expanse of the digital universe. During one afternoon session, as Aya deftly navigates a coding exercise, Marty offers guidance from across the table, cool and encouraging. "It's all about problem-solving, Aya," Marty explains, his grey eyes focusing on the girl's progress on the screen. "Just like life. Each piece of code is a step towards a solution." Aya marvels at the machinations unfolding before her, her interest not solely based on academia, but also sparked by this man so starkly different from the locals, a man who carries with him the gravity of far-off places and the quiet confidence of refined knowledge. To her, he's more mentor than teacher, and suddenly her own potential feels boundless. Meanwhile, in their shared bedroom adorned with posters of pop stars and athletes, Faith and Hope confer in hushed tones. "Have you noticed Aya lately?" Faith's brow knits with worry. "Yeah, it's like she cares more about Dad's lessons than hanging out," whispers Hope, fiddling with the end of her braid. "And it's weird, she's always asking questions about him." The twins share a concerned glance, their teenage intuition sensing a change in their friend that they can't quite place. They'd been excited to share everything with Aya: the beach trips, the weekend markets, the shared jokes. Now, those moments seem overshadowed by her admiration for their father. At dinner, as the laughter and chatter fill the Peck household with a warm glow, Aya's sudden success becomes a topic of discussion. Marty, less aware of the undercurrents, beams with pride at Aya's sharp upturn in school. "Lori, she's like a sponge, absorbs everything I teach her. This girl has a bright future ahead," he says, passing a dish to Lori, who nods thoughtfully. Outside, under the starlit Caribbean sky, the twins vow to keep an eye on Aya, unsure of what her fascination with their father might bring. They want to protect the simple harmony they've found in Sueno del Mar, even if they are only beginning to understand that paradise can have complexities of its own.
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Scene and dialogue. A month later, the Peck family returns to the mainland, to the Philly area. Marty's father, Stephen, had died, and the family would be away for a while. Aya has gotten completely restless, as the temporary departure is shrouded in secrecy, whispers, hushed voices. She hasn't done any homework since the Peck family left, and she's been acting out in school. Her mother Carmen and father Cristian, try to calm her down, as she's being annoying. Her younger brother Kevin echoes their sentients, although with a more mocking tone. Exhausted, Carmen and Cristian tell her that they are out of town for a funeral and would be back eventually. Aya again argues that they haven't been back for 4 days, and she wonders if they ever cared about her at all. Carmen sighs as she pulls a letter from her purse, addressed to Aya and the Herrera family. Marty, Faith, and Hope have all left her a message. They would be away for around a week, and Lori's pregnancy makes air travel unfeasible. They would be traveling by passenger ship. Faith and Hope have drawn hearts, and Marty has drawn a robot. A P.S. note hints that Faith and Hope talked him into it. Aya feels betrayed by her parents, as they hid it from her. Carmen admits that she didn't want Aya getting too close to them. Something particularly sensitive is that she's going to protestant churches with them on Sundays, while she's always been raised Catholic. Aya contends that Mr. Peck (Marty) has increased her grades and made learning fun. Meanwhile, a thousand miles away, Faith and Hope are looking at souvenirs they think Aya will like. It had never occurred to them since they lived there so long, and Philly was a part of them. But now they were tourists. A Philly cheesesteak keychain, a liberty bell, a Philadelphia Liberty Lions (Note: rugby team). Abigail, the youngest, suggests a New York Yankees cap. Geoffrey rudely throws it on the ground (Note: city rivalries.) Lori quickly pulls him aside to give him a talking to, but as Geoffrey walks with his mother, he turns his head back to shout his nomination. A Phillies cap. With a simple P centered on the cap, it's sure to be iconic. Faith agrees as Hope floats the idea of buying Electrowaves (note: newest gaming console), so the family could play Mighty Max (Note: fictional substitute for Super Mario) with her. Marty agrees. He tells the children he trusts them to play responsibly as he pays for the souvenirs, including the Yankees hat which Lori is making Geoffrey wear as punishment.
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INT. HERRERA HOUSE - DAY Aya sits at the kitchen table, her schoolbooks scattered but untouched, the desolation of her mood as stark as the uneaten breakfast on her plate. Her parents, CARMEN and CRISTIAN, exchange worried glances, while her brother KEVIN smirks from behind his orange juice. CARMEN: (to Aya) Mi amor, por favor. You need to concentrate on your schoolwork. The Pecks will be back. AYA: (throwing her pen down) But why aren't they back yet? What if they just left because they don't care? KEVIN: (mockingly) Maybe they went back to find smarter friends. Carmen shoots Kevin a reproachful look before pulling out a letter from her purse and handing it to Aya. CARMEN: Here, they left this for you. Aya snatches the letter, her eyes scanning over the colorful drawings of hearts and the whimsically sketched robot. The note from Faith and Hope feels both personal and playful, while Marty's P.S. with its robot added in brings a reluctant smile to her face. AYA: (turning on her parents) Why didn't you tell me this sooner?! CRISTIAN: (sighs) We wanted to protect you, Aya. You were getting too... involved. AYA: (defensively) Mr. Peck makes learning exciting and I'm finally doing well in school. Can't you see that? INT. PHILLY SOUVENIR SHOP - DAY The Peck family browses the aisles of the shop filled with memorabilia. FAITH holds up the Phillies cap while HOPE clutches a stack of video games. Their youngest sister, ABBY, skips between displays, wide-eyed and cheerful. FAITH: (to Hope) I think Aya will love this cap. HOPE: And these games! She can join us in Mighty Max adventures. LORI, noticeably weary and heavy with child, watches GEOFFREY begrudgingly sporting the Yankees cap, much to his chagrin. GEOFFREY: (shouting back at his family while walking with Lori) We're getting the Phillies cap! No Yankees! LORI: (shaking her head with a smile) You're going to wear that cap all day, mister, to learn a lesson about sportsmanship. Meanwhile, MARTY finishes paying for the items, including a peace offering of the video game console. MARTY: (addressing the children) I'm trusting you all to play responsibly with Aya and not spend all day in front of the screen. The cashier hands Marty the bag of souvenirs, the family's connection to Aya tangible in the objects they've chosen. INT. HERRERA HOUSE - DAY Back in Cuba, Aya clutches the letter, her anger dissolving into understanding. She misses the Pecks, yet the drawings from Faith and Hope and the thought of playing games with them soothe her. CARMEN: (softening) They've clearly made a difference for you, Aya. And it's only a week. Aya nods slightly, a truce reached with her parents. She glances back at the letter, the robot drawing making her determined to improve her work until the Pecks return. Carmen watches her daughter, a mix of concern and hope on her face. FADE OUT.
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Soon, the Peck family returns to Sueno del Mar. Lori is clutching baby Cole tight. They learn just how much they meant to Aya, as the Herrera family waits for them at Havana harbor. Aya has tears in her eyes, and she is holding flowers. It's clear she's the most invested in it, and Last night, Carmen had dialed the number the Pecks left behind, and confirmed their return date. Aya wanted their return to be special, but Carmen didn't want to throw a fiesta for them, so she chooses to go the Peck house. There's tension between the adults in the family as Cristian feels his parental authority is being undermined. While Lori is in the kitchen, Carmen whispers to Cristian that maybe she (Carmen) should cook after all, to make sure Lori doesn't mess anything up. Cristian also notes that he (Cristian) have his entire family at the table if he were hosting, but that he guesses protestants work differently, maybe a jab at the Pecks' parenting and the discipline they've instilled in their children. (Note: The twins, Abby, and Geoffrey are afforded a little more freedom, and they typically join dinner about 10 minutes before the meals are done.) Aya, having never taken off the Phillies cap, overhears them as Carmen heads to the kitchen. Cristian tells her that it isn't ladylike to wear a hat inside, and that she's making the family look bad. Then, the dinner. Lori wanted it it to be extra "Philly", and Cuban at the same time (Note: She's made Cubano cheesesteaks and deep dish pizzas, among other dishes. You can add these.) The dinner is delicious, and the video games help Faith and Hope reconnect with Aya, but she doesn't let it cut into her time with Marty. The opposite. She simply spends more time with the Pecks. Faith and Hope are quite happy with it, and Geoffrey is fine because Aya takes their attention off of him. Lori on the other hand thinks Aya is quite odd. but then her mind drifts back to an earlier conversation in the morning. Faith and Hope were always fine with being B+ students, but Aya had motivated them to excel. This is because Aya treated her grades with excessive pride. The same grades she stopped caring about when she thought the Pecks had left for good. Cut to Aya and the twins. She tells the twins that they should listen to their father more. Faith, a bit stung, asks her if dad put her up to that. Aya denies the accusation. She backpedals a bit as she tells them that there are 412 million people in the Grand Union, and billions that want to get in. It's competitive, and a B+ might not be enough in life. It's out of concern.
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EXT. HAVANA HARBOR - DAY The Havana Harbor bustles with the afternoon commotion as the Peck family disembarks, the tropical sun catching on the new addition to their family. LORI, holding baby COLE tightly, scans the crowd until her eyes land on the HERRERA FAMILY. AYA, with tear-streaked cheeks and a bunch of flowers in her hands, rushes forward, the Phillies cap still perched atop her head. CUT TO: INT. PECK HOUSE - KITCHEN - DAY The kitchen is abuzz with the sounds and smells of Lori's cooking. CARMEN leans in to whisper to CRISTIAN. CARMEN: (in a hushed tone) I should take over the cooking, make sure nothing gets ruined. CRISTIAN: (quietly) If this was my house, I'd have my whole family at the table already... They both glance towards AYA, who overhears CRISTIAN'S comment. CRISTIAN: (to Aya) Es hora de quitarte esa gorra, Aya. It is not ladylike to wear a hat indoors. You're making us look bad. Aya hesitantly removes the cap, but her eyes linger on the Peck children as she does, unsure where she fits in. CUT TO: INT. PECK HOUSE - DINING ROOM - NIGHT The dinner radiates warmth and cross-cultural flair, with Cubano cheesesteaks and deep-dish pizzas mingling on the table, topped off by an air of subtle awkwardness between the adults. As Faith and Hope reconnect with Aya over the new video games, showing her the ropes in Mighty Max, their shared laughter pierces the tension. AYA: (excitedly) These games are amazing! And your dad helped me pass our school's tech challenge. He's brilliant! FAITH looks at HOPE, sensing a ripple of unease as AYA continues to lavish praise on their father. CUT TO: INT. PECK HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT LORI, observing from a distance, finds AYA'S focus on Marty curious. She reflects on how AYA'S influence has spurred the twins to strive beyond their typical efforts in school. FAITH and HOPE, now a bit defensive, approach AYA who is admiring their father's computer setup. FAITH: (indignant) Did Dad tell you to say that? That we should listen to him more? AYA: (surprised) No, no, I would never! I just think... well, with so many people in the Grand Union, we need to work hard. HOPE: (softening) You really think a B+ won't cut it? AYA: (sincere) I care about you two. We need to be the best we can be. The atmosphere softens with the realization that AYA'S earnestness is born from genuine concern--a shared ambition fostering a new bond among the three girls. FADE OUT.
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I like the scene, but Aya doesn't get the Phillies cap until the Pecks give it to her.
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My apologies for the oversight. Let's revisit and amend the scene to reflect the correct sequence of events concerning the Phillies cap. --- EXT. HAVANA HARBOR - DAY The HERRERA FAMILY vicariously shares the excitement of welcoming the Pecks back home. AYA is particularly moved, eagerly clutching a bouquet of local flowers as if to offer sola, but also seeking connection. The PECK FAMILY finally catches sight of the Herrerars, led by AYA, with her eyes shimmering with anticipation. FAITH and HOPE, now double the excitement upon seeing Aya's emotional greeting, eagerly reach into their bags and present her with the Phillies cap. FAITH: We brought this back for you, Aya... directly from Philly! AYA places the cap onto her head, her smile as bright as the Cuban sun. The simple gesture symbolizing their friendship and her newfound kinship with the Peck family. --- INT. PECK HOUSE - KITCHEN - DAY LORI cooks, her movements betraying a hint of tiredness from the recent family changes. CARMEN nudges CRISTIAN, with a blend of concern and cultural pride. CARMEN: (whispering) I should really take over the cooking to make sure... CRISTIAN watches AYA embrace the Peck family, his paternal instincts conflicting with his respect for their familial autonomy. CRISTIAN: (muttering) I don't understand their ways... Everyone should be gathered around already, not scattered about the place. With a slight hesitation, but evident respect for their guests, he refrains from making further comments. --- INT. PECK HOUSE - DINING ROOM - NIGHT The room beams with an array of cross-cultural offerings, the Cubano cheesesteaks and deep-dish pizzas indeed look "extra Philly," yet unmistakably blended with Cuban tastes. The adults nurse their own thoughts, while the children bond over video games. LORI watches the interactions from a mother's vantage, noting AYA's intense focus on their family, particularly on Marty. LORI: (thinking to herself) She seems really fond of Marty... interesting. Her thoughts drift to the morning, acknowledging that AYA's eagerness for excellence is positively influencing Faith and Hope. --- INT. PECK HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT Amidst sounds of laughter and camaraderie, AYA engages in a game of Mighty Max with the twins. They reply with both joy and curiosity at this newfound aspect of her personality. AYA: (teasingly) You guys could do better in school, you know. Just need to focus a bit more, like your dad says. FAITH: (raising an eyebrow) Dad didn't put you up to this, right? AYA: (rest assuredly) No, I just mean... we've got to be competitive. We can't settle for average, not in a union this big, not with a world this competitive. HOPE: (smiling slightly) You have a point, I guess a B+ might seem small when you put it like that. The room fills with the sense that AYA isn't just teaching the twins about competition; she's bringing them together, tying their ambitions with the strength of their bond. FAITH: (grinning) Alright, Aya, let's make you the best Mighty Max player too! AYA joyfully accepts the challenge, the Phillies cap now a token of her aspirations and her deepening ties to the Peck family. FADE OUT.
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A month later, Aya turns to Marty for help with her science project. At the time, Marty is playing with Abigail. Marty is happy to help, but he wonders why her own parents cannot help her. She tells him they aren't as smart as he is, and they think computers are a waste of time. Marty disagrees with her harsh assessment of her parents, and says that they are perfectly capable of helping her. (Note: she sees the Peck family as more important to her than her own.) and she takes it as an insult. She asks if he's trying to get rid of her. He capitulates. He asks her what she wants to do. She replies that she wants to create a computer role-playing game named Nova's Quest. She asks for a PC, as she doesn't have her own, and for him to help her carry it (note: laptops weren't too common in 1992). He agrees, but he thinks they should opt for a more portable model. A laptop. The IBM ThinkPad is a new model, released earlier in the year. "What's a laptop?" She asks. He explains. Next, He wants to know the basic information of her story. She unzips her backpack to reveal a notebook. She must have written 25 pages' worth of information, and he comes across a neat drawing of what can only be its protagonist: Nova. He looks suspiciously like Marty. She doesn't like the look on his face. He tells her that she's just really passionate. He leaves Abigail with the twins as he heads off to Techtronics with Aya to see if the Thinkpad is still in stock.
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INT. PECK LIVING ROOM - DAY Marty is on the ground arranging blocks with ABIGAIL, a look of contented focus on their faces. AYA stands in the doorway hesitantly, clutching a large binder against her chest. AYA: (awkwardly) Mr. Peck, I need help with my science project... Marty glances up, his expression gentle yet inquisitive. MARTY: Happy to help, Aya. But isn't this something your parents could assist you with? Aya shifts uncomfortably, her gaze set firmly on Marty. AYA: (defensively) They... they don't understand this stuff like you do. They think computers are just a phase. MARTY: (shaking his head) They're smarter than you think, Aya. And they care about you a lot. Aya recoils as if struck, her eyes sharp with concern and a hint of betrayal. AYA: (suspiciously) Are you trying to get rid of me? Marty notices her distress and quickly tries to defuse the situation. MARTY: (children, in the background, continue giggling) Of course not, Aya. Let's see what we can do. What's your project about? AYA: (brightening a bit) I want to create a computer role-playing game. It's called Nova's Quest. MARTY: (standing and stretching) Sounds ambitious. You need a computer to work on it, don't you? AYA: (nodding eagerly) Yes, can you help me get one? Marty discreetly signals for Faith and Hope to keep an eye on Abby as he stands up. MARTY: Let's go for a more portable option. A laptop, maybe? Have you heard of the IBM ThinkPad? AYA: (perplexed) What's a laptop? MARTY: (smirking slightly) It's like a computer you can carry with you. Smaller, but still powerful. Aya's eyes widen with the magic of the idea, her excitement visibly renewed. INT. AYA'S BACKPACK - DAY Marty flips through AYA'S notebook, filled with handwritten notes and elaborate sketches. He pauses at the drawing of NOVA, who bears an uncanny resemblance to him. Aya glances at him, trying to read his expression. AYA: (needing reassurance) Do you think it's too much? MARTY: (tactfully) You just seem really passionate, Aya. It's a good thing. AYA: (relieved) I hope so. EXT. TECHTRONICS STORE - DAY Techtronics stands as a beacon of modern gadgets. Marty and Aya push through the door into the promise of cutting-edge technology. INT. TECHTRONICS STORE - DAY Rows of shiny electronics glisten under the fluorescent lights. Marty makes his way to the laptop section, Aya trailing close behind. A salesperson approaches. SALESPERSON: (greeting) Looking for something specific? MARTY: (to the salesperson) We're interested in the new IBM ThinkPad. You still got those in stock? The salesperson nods and leads them towards a display, igniting a spark of possibility in Aya's eyes--one that Marty notices and appreciates, his mentorship role always present. FADE OUT.
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They find one, Thinkpad 700, and have fun along the way (Note: You add something.) They get to talking, and he's again surprised that she likes to listen to his lectures about computers, and his job at IBM. In addition to programming, he's helping connect the entire union to the internet, starting with public facilities like libraries and schools. He talks about the future of computing (Note: feel free to simulate this discussion as well. Remember, it's 1992. Bill Clinton is president of the Grand Union, with Brian Mulroney and Al Gore as co-vice presidents. But the computers are more important.) Aya says that she wishes her family would teach her more. She also regretfully tells him that her relationship with her parents is "rough", and that it's gotten worse since she met the Pecks. But that she doesn't care what they think as long as she has the Pecks. Marty is a bit concerned. They return to the Peck house, and they enjoy what remains of a big meal cooked up by Lori(Note: I am leaving the descriptions as well as what is in the feast up to you.)