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1 fiction conversations over 4 days (Jun 11, 2023 – Jun 16, 2023) 87% prompt uniqueness New South Wales, Australia
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C0 This text is the first ten pages of a larger scifi story: The Earth Space Transi 4 conv. C1 In a stone room only lit wit Barrziers and tourchs how would you discribe the mo 1 conv. C2 You are a beta reader Identfy issues with this fragment of a much larger story: 1 conv. C3 on a multi deck spacecraft how do you prevent people from becoming lost 1 conv. C4 In a hyperthical ship that has an FTL drive what is the maximum deceleration for 1 conv. C5 Is it possible that buildings of the future might be so tall that the stree woul 1 conv. C6 If what people say tells you about them as a person, what does this quate by my 1 conv. C7 What is the silent moment of realisation called when you silently understand som 1 conv. C8 In my story there is a place called the Hall of Energy. Its architechture is suc 1 conv. C9 based on this conversation create a story outline: What about a story where the 1 conv. C10 Jade McConnell, Born Tanzinia. Expertertise: Spaceoperations, Space Rescue, expe 1 conv. C11 I am writing a scifi story and it involves the crew of a missing intergalictic f 1 conv. C12 In my scifi story what spacesuit decontamnation procedures would be requiered fo 1 conv. C13 Notes on the Foxton-Milton Animation Process: Until its loss (date unknown), the 1 conv. C14 In a future where other parts of the universe (Beyound our own galixy) have been 1 conv. C15 Cheek the logic of thi method of payment in my story: Under the condition where 1 conv. C16 In a story there is an ugent situation (lives at risk) and there is limited time 1 conv. C17 In a story there is an ugent situation (lives at risk) and there is limited time 1 conv. C18 Cheek this story text for passive voice: if any is found replace with a storng v 1 conv. C19 She felt like her life was as a passing shadow, a fleeting; efermoral thing. Had × 1 conv. C20 I have tried a bit of practice at disvritive writing but it proible needs more s 1 conv.
1 conversation in cluster Cluster 19× “She felt like her life was as a passing shadow, a fleeting; ...” over less than a minute (Jun 15, 2023 – Jun 15, 2023), oldest first. Show: 10 15 50 100
Jun 15, 2023 at 10:15 AM AEST — 1 turn Australia, New South Wales fiction toxic View full conversation
USER: She felt like her life was as a passing shadow, a fleeting; efermoral thing. Had she held on, to long, to tightly? If so she coulden't be sure. Every breath was heavey, like the hurt of being burnt by ten thousend suns. Every breath seemed like a hour, when in reality it had been but a moment. The night was hot, the hoest night in fifty long years; but this night it would rain, not a pleasent soft rain, but the kind of rain that would wash the slime off the face of the city. The city, what a place; forgotten by time and in someones budget, so corrupt, so crime ridden that even the rats unionized and payed someone for protextion. Slowly suffcating under the waight of the low and the lonley, the wieight of the sleeze and the multitude of privations, where the swers ran with LSD and Cocaine. Damn, did she ever want to leave, sitting on her roof listening to cool alley cats, play hot rifts on Saxaphones. "She felt like her life was a passing shadow, fleeting and ephemeral. Had she held on too long, too tightly? She couldn't be sure. Each breath was heavy, like the pain of being burnt by ten thousand suns. Every breath lasted an hour, but it had only been a moment. The night was hot, the hottest in fifty years, but it would soon rain. Not a pleasant, soft rain, but the kind of rain that would wash the slime off the face of the city. The city was a forgotten place, ignored by time and in everyone's budget. It was so corrupt and crime-ridden that even the rats had unionized and paid...
CHATBOT: Yes, splitting the sentence after the word "moment" would help make it clearer. Here is a revised version of the example text with the suggested change: "Every breath seemed like an hour when, in reality, it had been but a moment. The night was hot, the hottest night in fifty long years. But this night it would rain; not a pleasant, soft rain but the kind of rain that would wash the slime off the face of the city." By breaking the text into separate sentences, it becomes easier to read and understand. Additionally, this revision focuses on one idea at a time, which helps with clarity.