C0 Filter It only amounted to one, and it would always be one and never two --and t 201 conv. C1 Hey, where's your mom and dad , huh? " Ryan asked, the girl's tiny amber irises 47 conv. C2 Is this written at an advanced level: "Ah Ryan, you're a handsome bastard for su 46 conv. C3 How is this piece of writing : As he opened his eyes , his pulse was in his thro 30 conv. C4 Sweat crawled in slivering, unwholesome trails of vessel-breaking tears, bathing 25 conv. C5 due to Elara's pregnancy being smooth sailing and healthy, if not deeply sensual 24 conv. C6 Ryan came into focus , and his bare feet came to a nullification of movement as 22 conv. C7 How about this : Lara felt the agony crescendo through her tightening abdomen , 22 conv. C8 As Carter grasped her wrist, his fingers locating her pulse point as his binds w 21 conv. C9 She nodded, biting her lip as she drew a quiet strength from deep within her abd 17 conv. C10 Has the author achieved something challenging? Victor glanced out across the fie 11 conv. C11 She was standing by the waterfront, the hospital safely in the background as she 11 conv. C12 His gaze wandered from his shaking hands and out onto horizon, trailing the star 9 conv. C13 Which version is more resonant : one : As Liam integrated his eyes with the dire 7 conv. C14 As Carter grasped her wrist, his fingers locating her pulse point as his binds w 6 conv. C15 With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes, he flashed a smile that cap 6 conv. C16 Holding her closer to his pulse, Max stood against the metallic wall of the NICU 5 conv. C17 (empty) 5 conv. C18 The sub-zero teeth pierced his flesh as the flare of saline bled through his por 4 conv. C19 His eyes burnt with the heat radiating through his vision , as he was forced int 4 conv. C20 His aching skull, enraged with the pulse of rising nausea, intercepted with the 4 conv. C21 Is this a realistic piece? Mason sighed in frustration, balling another pair of 4 conv. C22 as the road stretched bare and cold ahead of them, Liam felt an imperceptible gl × 4 conv. C23 Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's arm, smiled against the warm twilight rays 4 conv. C24 Maybe it amounted to nothing-after hours of rotting in the daylight , night had 3 conv. C25 Is this well written: With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes , he f 3 conv. C26 The disquiet of the three am bustle that only a hospital could generate, other i 3 conv. C27 Is this dialogue effective: The air was unrelenting in its suctioning nature, st 3 conv. C28 The roads were dead, lifeless , without a pulse as Ryan watched Liam's broken fi 3 conv. C29 Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's arm, smiled against the warm twilight rays 3 conv. C30 Please highlight effective descriptions and dialogue: "The sight of his crumpled 3 conv. C31 Her eyes were deflecting the neon light as she penetrated his gaze, "tell me som 2 conv. C32 Please don't finish it "That scar , I wasn't conscious when they-. " As if expec 2 conv. C33 Valen's voice filtered into the depths of Ryan's pleading body as his boots were 2 conv. C34 "Ryan is silent , is he not ? And somehow , he's been a bystander . Watching it 2 conv. C35 "No, because .... You're worth that kid's trust , her missing you everyday , thi 2 conv. C36 As Valen suctioned his saliva around the cavity of a decaying tooth , draining t 2 conv. C37 Ryan's complexion, draining of color, almost revealed a two-digit number. "Eleve 2 conv. C38 Please assess this passage : The crimson line seared across the horizon, suffoca 2 conv. C39 sweat crawled in slivering , unwholesome trails of vessel breaking tears, bathin 2 conv. C40 Just then, his phone screamed to life and he unlocked it in panic "Max Hawthorne 2 conv. C41 Which passage is more emotionally resonant? One: Ryan only held fragments of the 2 conv. C42 Is this realistic and not too romantic trope : I went through quite the ordeal , 2 conv. C43 "Ah Ryan, you're a good-lookin' bastard , from the collarbone up, that is. But f 1 conv. C44 Please write the rest of this scene :Liam ran a steady hand across Elena's navel 1 conv. C45 Please highlight the intense parts : She panted hard, letting herself finally gi 1 conv. C46 "Well you better keep that breathing steady for me , I can't stall this any long 1 conv. C47 Ryan's hazel aspect shone with flecks of illumination as he said "you never actu 1 conv. C48 She returned Liam's hand to continue the familiar build to the junction of pleas 1 conv. C49 "How, on earth, was the baby not detectable during her actual labor, there was o 1 conv. C50 Liam felt the bed rail shake with her hands as she collapsed against the side. " 1 conv. C51 Is this hug well written? Ryan pulled Liam into a hug that burned with regret , 1 conv. C52 A lingering testament to the sound of unease , the embodiment of reckless abando 1 conv. C53 In the dim light, Valen found a twisted kind of solace, toying with the cavity o 1 conv. C54 It had been warm, yet pleasant , embalming them both in a magenta twilight. In t 1 conv. C55 Here's a prompt to make my character have a drunk argument with a family member 1 conv. C56 Is the narrative complex: a duck went quack 1 conv. C57 H 1 conv. C58 " Morning , Lily , you must be wondering where Daddy went, or where Mommy is hid 1 conv. C59 "Valen, you know Liam is starting to piss me the hell off... well to be dramatic 1 conv. C60 What are some interesting prompts for my characters, like situations I can plot 1 conv. C61 rate the sentence 1 conv. C62 Lara felt the agony crescendo through her tightening abdomen , the deep pressure 1 conv. C63 His acuity, melting into the atmosphere, left him with no other thoughts. 'You r 1 conv. C64 Here Valen taunts Liam with the possibility of having blinded Ryan .. isn't that 1 conv. C65 Passage one "In the waning light, Liam's battle against the encroaching darkness 1 conv. C66 Does this seem like a real conversation: "Well, seeing as , I'm here , and you s 1 conv. C67 Liam's eyes flickered with the discolouration of imploring deception as he said 1 conv. C68 Carter crashed to his knees , the gold flecks in his red-raw eyes lighting with 1 conv. C69 Which is mis compelling 1 conv. C70 Hi 1 conv. C71 Is this well written? Their footsteps fell in sync as Mason matched his strides 1 conv. C72 Is this professional: It only amounted to one, and it would always--in his fatig 1 conv. C73 Analyse the compellingness of my plot 1 conv. C74 V 1 conv. C75 Is this plausible? "Do you want someone to talk to about it? Or we could just si 1 conv. C76 Is this plausible : Ethan's knuckles dug further into the denim of his jeans , h 1 conv. C77 Snatching it up with a gleam in his eye, he reached out and caught her slim elbo 1 conv. C78 Ok an experiment : Victor , twirling his fork through a saturated noodle, suppre 1 conv. C79 Is this gratuitous and exploitative or well written? 1 conv. C80 Please highlight some effective dialogue within this passage : Holding Lily in h 1 conv. C81 . The strict , no external ,nor unsanitary objects placard , and stringent autoi 1 conv. C82 The air was biting, frost outlining her sighs of contentment as a doctor ruffled 1 conv. C83 Here's the passage with the additional text broken into paragraphs: "That's it, 1 conv. C84 Is this overwrought: The disquiet of the three am bustle that only a hospital co 1 conv. C85 Analyse this sentence and the word choice : It only amounted to one, and it woul 1 conv. C86 What does "my levity is your jeopardy " mean 1 conv. C87 Dialogue Nah, nobody waiting for this sorry ass . Lost my family a while back , 1 conv. C88 Liam's jaw clenched as he whispered "Please help me-", flinching as the sight of 1 conv. C89 Does the flash back make sense 1 conv. C90 Is the physicality explained well here: Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's ar 1 conv. C91 How can u word this better 1 conv. C92 Is there ryth 1 conv. C93 Is this gritty and effective? : They walked in shared disorientation, with Liam 1 conv. C94 Are these phrases gritty and effective.. please don't rewrite them : They walked 1 conv. C95 Is this gritty and effective As Liam writhed in the dying sunlight, his skin eru 1 conv. C96 Which ending is more emotionally resonant one or two 1 conv. C97 "Nah, nobody waiting for this sorry ass . Lost my family a while back , got used 1 conv. C98 Is the dialogue natural? 1 conv. C99 Are the names Liam and Ryan good for two best friends in a thriller story 1 conv. C100 Is this written at high skill level or a low skill level? Help me--No. No," he p 1 conv. C101 Does this flow well, don't revise: "As they walked in disorientation, Liam was m 1 conv. C102 : In the twilight haze, Ethans' eyes flew open , the saccharine , psychotropic c 1 conv. C103 Is this sentence effective, don't rephrase: "Hell yeah , you don't " Liam's smat 1 conv. C104 Are these phrases effective? "Liam, I don't know that I'm above crawling in ther 1 conv. C105 G 1 conv. C106 Please break my passage into paragraphs like yours but don't rephrase 1 conv. C107 Please comment and the naturalism of the dialogue: Leaning into her touch as her 1 conv. C108 Leaning into her touch as her fingers moved to the tender spot between his earlo 1 conv. C109 Please write a quick letter to my nephrologist explaining that I want to quit di 1 conv.