C0 due to Elara's pregnancy being smooth sailing and healthy, if not deeply sensual 12 conv. C1 Maybe it amounted to nothing-after hours of rotting in the daylight , night had 8 conv. C2 "Well you better keep that breathing steady for me , I can't stall this any long 7 conv. C3 Coukd this be published work? : It only amounted to one, and it would always be 6 conv. C4 Please quote realistic dialogue and moments: Releasing a controlled, soft moan , 5 conv. C5 Filter It only amounted to one, and it would always be one and never two --and t 5 conv. C6 Filter It only amounted to one, and it would always be one and never two --and t 4 conv. C7 His gaze wandered from his shaking hands and out onto horizon, trailing the star 4 conv. C8 Releasing a controlled, soft moan , she overrode the urge , finding equilibrium 4 conv. C9 As Carter grasped her wrist, his fingers locating her pulse point as his binds w 4 conv. C10 rate the sentence 4 conv. C11 Please break my passage into paragraphs like yours but don't rephrase 4 conv. C12 Ah Ryan, you're a good-lookin' bastard , from the collarbone up, that is. But fo 3 conv. C13 Is this an idealised portrayal: But you said mine is too idealised ok, what if i 3 conv. C14 Here's a scene based on a prompt to put my character in a graveyard in the snow: 3 conv. C15 Ryan hauled his torso through the splinters of glass, blood saturating his shirt 3 conv. C16 Cartridge Carter crashed to his knees , the gold flecks in his red-raw eyes ligh 3 conv. C17 Is this written at an advanced level: "Ah Ryan, you're a handsome bastard for su 2 conv. C18 Ah Ryan, you're a good-lookin' bastard , from the collarbone up, that is. But fo 2 conv. C19 Is this too melodramatic: Valen's voice filtered into the depths of Ryan's plead 2 conv. C20 How is this piece of writing : As he opened his eyes , his pulse was in his thro 2 conv. C21 As he opened his eyes , his pulse was in his throat , chasing the burn of the ro 2 conv. C22 Is the use and failure of the pipe plausible Maybe it amounted to nothing-after 2 conv. C23 Ah Ryan, you're a good-lookin' bastard , from the collarbone up, that is. But fo 2 conv. C24 Releasing a controlled, soft moan , she overrode the urge , finding equilibrium 2 conv. C25 Is this advanced writing: Drown Maybe it amounted to nothing-after hours of rott 2 conv. C26 As Valen suctioned his saliva around the cavity of a decaying tooth , draining t 2 conv. C27 Are the metaphors judicious? As Valen suctioned his saliva around the cavity of 2 conv. C28 It had been warm, yet pleasant , embalming them both in a magenta twilight. In t 2 conv. C29 As Ryan pushed his thighs through the rubble, honing in on the sound of human te 2 conv. C30 His eyes burnt with the heat radiating through his vision , as he was forced int 2 conv. C31 Ryan hauled his torso through the splinters of glass, blood saturating his shirt 2 conv. C32 Highlight advanced narrative that is rich in detail yet not overwrought or exces 2 conv. C33 His acuity, melting into the atmosphere, left him with no other thoughts. 'You r 2 conv. C34 Does this passage exhibit maturity in writing ? Singer Here's an attempt at natu 2 conv. C35 Carter crashed to his knees , the gold flecks in his red-raw eyes lighting with 2 conv. C36 "Liam, just continue, can't have you both on the brink of -" There was a quiet b 2 conv. C37 Liam collapsed into the unforgiving embrace of the concrete, his ravaged body we 2 conv. C38 Is this advanced and of professional calibre? But the voice persisted, causing L 2 conv. C39 Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's arm, smiled against the warm twilight rays × 2 conv. C40 Passage one : Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's arm, smiled against the warm 2 conv. C41 Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's arm, smiled against the warm twilight rays 2 conv. C42 (unclustered) 168 conv.