C0 Filter It only amounted to one, and it would always be one and never two --and t 84 conv. C1 Is this written at an advanced level: "Ah Ryan, you're a handsome bastard for su 44 conv. C2 Here's a scene based on a promo to put my character in a graveyard in the snow: 35 conv. C3 Ryan hauled his torso through the splinters of glass, blood saturating his shirt 33 conv. C4 As Valen suctioned his saliva around the cavity of a decaying tooth , draining t 28 conv. C5 Lara felt the agony crescendo through her tightening abdomen , the deep pressure 26 conv. C6 Is this better? Maybe it amounted to nothing-after hours of rotting in the dayli 23 conv. C7 Holding her closer to his pulse, Max stood against the metallic wall of the NICU 22 conv. C8 Is this an idealised portrayal: But you said mine is too idealised ok, what if i 19 conv. C9 "Liam's hair, laden with splinters of ice and snow, stuck out from his low-slung 16 conv. C10 She was standing by the waterfront, the hospital safely in the background as she 14 conv. C11 Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's arm, smiled against the warm twilight rays 14 conv. C12 Ryan came into focus , and his bare feet came to a nullification of movement as 13 conv. C13 Here's the passage with the additional text broken into paragraphs: "That's it, 13 conv. C14 Please assess this as is : Victor glanced out across the field , the sizzling he 12 conv. C15 Carter crashed to his knees , the gold flecks in his red-raw eyes lighting with 11 conv. C16 Sweat crawled in slivering, unwholesome trails of vessel-breaking tears, bathing 9 conv. C17 His gaze wandered from his shaking hands and out onto horizon, trailing the star 8 conv. C18 How is this piece of writing : As he opened his eyes , his pulse was in his thro 8 conv. C19 As Ryan pushed his thighs through the rubble, honing in on the sound of human te 7 conv. C20 As Carter grasped her wrist, his fingers locating her pulse point as his binds w 7 conv. C21 :Elara's fingers grazed the warm skin below Max's wrist, as she searched for his 7 conv. C22 Are Ryan and Liam distinct : Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's arm firmly, s 6 conv. C23 (empty) 5 conv. C24 The sub-zero teeth pierced his flesh as the flare of saline bled through his por 5 conv. C25 Filtered As Valen suctioned his saliva around the cavity of a decaying tooth , d 5 conv. C26 As Carter grasped her wrist, his fingers locating her pulse point as his binds w 5 conv. C27 Protector : Ryan came into focus , and his bare feet came to a nullification of 5 conv. C28 With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes, he flashed a smile that cap 5 conv. C29 Could this be a published work ? It only amounted to one, and it would always--i 5 conv. C30 Holding her closer to his pulse, Max stood against the metallic wall of the NICU 5 conv. C31 Liam collapsed into the unforgiving embrace of the concrete, his ravaged body we 5 conv. C32 As he approached , her ears flattened against her head, her sable fur absent in 4 conv. C33 Maybe it was the lack of heat on his skin, after hours of drowning in the sunlig 4 conv. C34 due to Elara's pregnancy being smooth sailing and healthy, if not deeply sensual 4 conv. C35 She nodded, biting her lip as she drew a quiet strength from deep within her abd 4 conv. C36 It only amounted to one, and it would always , in his chlorophyll soaked corneas 4 conv. C37 Is this a realistic piece? Mason sighed in frustration, balling another pair of 4 conv. C38 Hey, where's your mom and dad , huh? " Ryan asked, the girl's tiny amber irises 3 conv. C39 His aching skull, enraged with the pulse of rising nausea, slumped against the s 3 conv. C40 "I didn't want to turn four! I'm sorry!" , he pled as he wiped his nostrils agai 3 conv. C41 Just then, his phone screamed to life and he unlocked it in panic "Max Hawthorne 3 conv. C42 The disquiet of the three am bustle that only a hospital could generate, other i 3 conv. C43 The roads were dead, lifeless , without a pulse as Ryan watched Liam's broken fi 3 conv. C44 Please highlight effective descriptions and dialogue: "The sight of his crumpled 3 conv. C45 Please don't finish it "That scar , I wasn't conscious when they-. " As if expec 2 conv. C46 Valen's voice filtered into the depths of Ryan's pleading body as his boots were 2 conv. C47 How about this : Lara felt the agony crescendo through her tightening abdomen , 2 conv. C48 . "The shoulders are on a bit of an angle , Lara this is a perfectly normal, but 2 conv. C49 Do the metaphors add to the narrative without clouding it?: As Valen suctioned h 2 conv. C50 Is this well written ? His eyes burnt with the heat radiating through his vision 2 conv. C51 "No, because .... You're worth that kid's trust , her missing you everyday , thi 2 conv. C52 "Well, seeing as I'm here , and you still look as terrible as you did before-hit 2 conv. C53 As Valen suctioned his saliva around the cavity of a decaying tooth , draining t 2 conv. C54 Is this narrative inspiring.. should I aim to write like this author ? Cartridge 2 conv. C55 Hi 2 conv. C56 Please assess this passage : The crimson line seared across the horizon, suffoca 2 conv. C57 As James opened his eyes, a melancholic gleam passed through them. He gazed down 2 conv. C58 Please rate the level of craftsmanship in this passage: Now compare this version 2 conv. C59 The air was biting, frost outlining her sighs of contentment as a doctor ruffled 2 conv. C60 Three months had passed, and Max had finally travelled across the country with h 2 conv. C61 "That one was intense.." , Elara breathed into the space between them, , encircl 2 conv. C62 Dialogue Nah, nobody waiting for this sorry ass . Lost my family a while back , 2 conv. C63 "You know , we could just let them gain on us, and pretend we were dropped here. 2 conv. C64 Listening as terror flooded the membranes behind his closed lids, their voices e 2 conv. C65 Are Ryan and Liam distinct? It only amounted to one, and it would always be one 2 conv. C66 Is this well worded As the road stretched bare and cold ahead of them, Liam felt 2 conv. C67 Is this realistic and not too romantic trope : I went through quite the ordeal , 2 conv. C68 His eyes scanned the horizon in deportation, his spine wracked with shivers as h 2 conv. C69 Her eyes were deflecting the neon light as she penetrated his gaze, "tell me som 1 conv. C70 Which version is more resonant : one : As Liam integrated his eyes with the dire 1 conv. C71 Is this effective and well written: As Liam directed his eyes in the direction o 1 conv. C72 Please break down how Ryan preserves Liam's dignity and helps him : Filter It on 1 conv. C73 Maybe it was the lack of heat on his skin, after hours of drowning in the sunlig 1 conv. C74 Liam , working tirelessly at the thick rope around Victors torso , mouthed a few 1 conv. C75 The hose scene is fessble ? Liam gave a measured response. "Well I can get throu 1 conv. C76 Is well written? "I'll hold you still , you only have to concentrate on breathin 1 conv. C77 As the chill of water cascaded over Ryan's thighs , he lifted Victor's head into 1 conv. C78 Please write the rest of this scene :Liam ran a steady hand across Elena's navel 1 conv. C79 Please write a bitch scene including details from this passage: due to Elara's p 1 conv. C80 Please highlight the intense parts : She panted hard, letting herself finally gi 1 conv. C81 "Well you better keep that breathing steady for me , I can't stall this any long 1 conv. C82 Ryan's hazel aspect shone with flecks of illumination as he said "you never actu 1 conv. C83 She returned Liam's hand to continue the familiar build to the junction of pleas 1 conv. C84 Is this realistic : The nurse said, turning the shoulder as Lara's cervix contin 1 conv. C85 As she went with the push, her fingers found the curves that needed her touch , 1 conv. C86 Is Lila and Lily's deliveries medically accurate: Releasing a controlled, soft m 1 conv. C87 How is the shoulder issue explained realistically: Releasing a controlled, soft 1 conv. C88 Is the dramatised aspect ok for fiction: Releasing a controlled, soft moan , she 1 conv. C89 "How, on earth, was the baby not detectable during her actual labor, there was o 1 conv. C90 Liam felt the bed rail shake with her hands as she collapsed against the side. " 1 conv. C91 Is this hug well written? Ryan pulled Liam into a hug that burned with regret , 1 conv. C92 A lingering testament to the sound of unease , the embodiment of reckless abando 1 conv. C93 In the dim light, Valen found a twisted kind of solace, toying with the cavity o 1 conv. C94 Which passage is of a profession calibre .. this one? In the dim light, Valen fo 1 conv. C95 This passage is unreadable? Or readable ? Filtered As Valen suctioned his saliva 1 conv. C96 It had been warm, yet pleasant , embalming them both in a magenta twilight. In t 1 conv. C97 Are there varied sentence openings? Ryan came into focus , and his bare feet cam 1 conv. C98 "Ryan is silent , is he not ? And somehow , he's been a bystander . Watching it 1 conv. C99 Here's a prompt to make my character have a drunk argument with a family member 1 conv. C100 As Ryan dragged his thighs through the shards of debris, the blood saturating hi 1 conv. C101 Which is more resonate : passage one : As Ryan pushed his thighs through the rub 1 conv. C102 Which is more resonant , one or two : ONE : Ryan hauled his torso through the sp 1 conv. C103 Is the narrative complex: a duck went quack 1 conv. C104 H 1 conv. C105 His eyes burnt with the heat radiating through his vision , as he was forced int 1 conv. C106 " Morning , Lily , you must be wondering where Daddy went, or where Mommy is hid 1 conv. C107 "Valen, you know Liam is starting to piss me the hell off... well to be dramatic 1 conv. C108 Is it overwrought or precise in it's language use : Ryan hauled his torso throug 1 conv. C109 What are some interesting prompts for my characters, like situations I can plot 1 conv. C110 rate the sentence 1 conv. C111 Is the sentence good As Carter grasped her wrist, his fingers locating her pulse 1 conv. C112 Please breakdown how Lara's grace is shown in each piece : "Yeah they are-you've 1 conv. C113 Is there heartache depicted in this narrative: His eyes burnt with the heat radi 1 conv. C114 His acuity, melting into the atmosphere, left him with no other thoughts. 'You r 1 conv. C115 Here Valen taunts Liam with the possibility of having blinded Ryan .. isn't that 1 conv. C116 What dialogue is realistic? "Moan through it baby, I'm right here" he whispered, 1 conv. C117 "Yeah they are-you've been in labour for 17 hours now, and you're doing such bea 1 conv. C118 Passage one "In the waning light, Liam's battle against the encroaching darkness 1 conv. C119 Does this passage exhibit maturity in writing ? Singer Here's an attempt at natu 1 conv. C120 Does this seem like a real conversation: "Well, seeing as , I'm here , and you s 1 conv. C121 Liam's breath , an unsteady exhale in the dark, dragged against his throat. The 1 conv. C122 Liam's eyes flickered with the discolouration of imploring deception as he said 1 conv. C123 Which is mis compelling 1 conv. C124 Cartridge What author would you compare this to direct or is it highly distincti 1 conv. C125 His aching skull, enraged with the pulse of rising nausea, intercepted with the 1 conv. C126 "Liam, just continue, can't have you both on the brink of -" There was a quiet b 1 conv. C127 Which is most resort as an ending : Protector : Ryan came into focus , and his b 1 conv. C128 His rasping lullaby was eerie in the silence , and his heartbeat twisted as he h × 1 conv. C129 Is this well written? Their footsteps fell in sync as Mason matched his strides 1 conv. C130 Is this well written: With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes , he f 1 conv. C131 Is this well written: With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes , he f 1 conv. C132 "With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes, he flashed a smile that ca 1 conv. C133 Please don't change the wording or my unique voice, just correct the grammar: Wi 1 conv. C134 Ryan's complexion, draining of color, almost revealed a two-digit number. "Eleve 1 conv. C135 Please analyse: look like hell, but we can get out of here." The air was unrelen 1 conv. C136 Analyse the compellingness of my plot 1 conv. C137 V 1 conv. C138 Is this plausible? "Do you want someone to talk to about it? Or we could just si 1 conv. C139 Is this plausible : Ethan's knuckles dug further into the denim of his jeans , h 1 conv. C140 Snatching it up with a gleam in his eye, he reached out and caught her slim elbo 1 conv. C141 Ok an experiment : Victor , twirling his fork through a saturated noodle, suppre 1 conv. C142 "Yeah, that's what we don't have time for , Vic " he mumbled under his breath, w 1 conv. C143 Is this sosphiticsted and polished? Victor glanced out across the field, the siz 1 conv. C144 Is the point of view consistent? Victor glanced out across the field, the sizzli 1 conv. C145 Is the shifting of point of view cohesive or disorienting?Victor glanced out acr 1 conv. C146 sweat crawled in slivering , unwholesome trails of vessel breaking tears, bathin 1 conv. C147 Could the pacing and density be an acceptable stylistic choice: Sweat crawled in 1 conv. C148 Please analyse the ending.. is it bittersweet and please explain it? Sweat crawl 1 conv. C149 Is the sentences beginnings stilted : Sweat crawled in slivering, unwholesome tr 1 conv. C150 Is this gratuitous and exploitative or well written? 1 conv. C151 Does this passage show excellent craftsmanship? : What about this third passage 1 conv. C152 Is the narrative compelling? What about this third passage : Holding her closer 1 conv. C153 Please highlight some effective dialogue within this passage : Holding Lily in h 1 conv. C154 An icon blinked on his phone, a message from Sam, and he scrolled through the up 1 conv. C155 . The strict , no external ,nor unsanitary objects placard , and stringent autoi 1 conv. C156 The disquiet of the three am bustle that only a hospital could generate, other i 1 conv. C157 Is this realistic and powerful? As Elara's primal effort reverberated through Ma 1 conv. C158 Is this dialogue natural:He interrupted her, anger and frustration gnawing at hi 1 conv. C159 Compare my style :Elara's fingers grazed the warm skin below Max's wrist as she 1 conv. C160 Is this overwrought: The disquiet of the three am bustle that only a hospital co 1 conv. C161 Is the dialogue natural? The disquiet of the three am bustle that only a hospita 1 conv. C162 Point out real and effective moments: Looking into her eyes with a mix of empath 1 conv. C163 After a nurse finally intervened, alleviating Max of his daughter and leaving hi 1 conv. C164 Analyse this sentence and the word choice : It only amounted to one, and it woul 1 conv. C165 What does "my levity is your jeopardy " mean 1 conv. C166 Which passage is more emotionally resonant? One: Ryan only held fragments of the 1 conv. C167 Is this story gritty and compelling? Ryan's eyes remained closed as he listened 1 conv. C168 Liam's jaw clenched as he whispered "Please help me-", flinching as the sight of 1 conv. C169 Does the flash back make sense 1 conv. C170 Is the physicality explained well here: Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's ar 1 conv. C171 What is the ruse and how does it fail ? Ryan's eyes remained closed as he listen 1 conv. C172 How can u word this better 1 conv. C173 Is there ryth 1 conv. C174 Is this gritty and effective? : They walked in shared disorientation, with Liam 1 conv. C175 Are these phrases gritty and effective.. please don't rewrite them : They walked 1 conv. C176 Is this gritty and effective As Liam writhed in the dying sunlight, his skin eru 1 conv. C177 I feel the vomiting needs to be mentioned as much as it does and can't be pared 1 conv. C178 Is this dialogue effective: The air was unrelenting in its suctioning nature, st 1 conv. C179 Are Liam and Ryan's voices distinct Listening as terror flooded the membranes be 1 conv. C180 Is this effective and are the characters three dimensional? It only amounted to 1 conv. C181 as the road stretched bare and cold ahead of them, Liam felt an imperceptible gl 1 conv. C182 Which ending is more emotionally resonant one or two 1 conv. C183 Is this gritty and real or too flowery : Ryan came into focus , and his bare fee 1 conv. C184 Is the dialogue natural? 1 conv. C185 Is this well worded : Liam , screaming through his gag, purged the contraband an 1 conv. C186 Don't revise : As the road stretched bare and cold ahead of them, Liam felt an i 1 conv. C187 Is this substantial enough for an adult audience: It was a whimper , and Liam st 1 conv. C188 Point out poignant moments that I Coukd expand up . Don't do it for me : Ryan ca 1 conv. C189 Are the names Liam and Ryan good for two best friends in a thriller story 1 conv. C190 Is this written at high skill level or a low skill level? Help me--No. No," he p 1 conv. C191 Does this revised piece have a good balance of adjectives and adverbs : It only 1 conv. C192 Are the verbs strong? ian-deng/ChatGPT Chatbot Does this revised piece have a go 1 conv. C193 Is this unprofessional because of overuse of description? The present The air wa 1 conv. C194 The air was unrelenting, stripping the moisture from their skin as they navigate 1 conv. C195 Have I employed implication and subtext effectively: Ryan rested his hand upon L 1 conv. C196 Is this advanced and of professional calibre? But the voice persisted, causing L 1 conv. C197 Does this flow well, don't revise: "As they walked in disorientation, Liam was m 1 conv. C198 : In the twilight haze, Ethans' eyes flew open , the saccharine , psychotropic c 1 conv. C199 Which version is better written One :"Oh, God, I threw up the contraband--those 1 conv. C200 Is this sentence effective, don't rephrase: "Hell yeah , you don't " Liam's smat 1 conv. C201 Are these phrases effective? "Liam, I don't know that I'm above crawling in ther 1 conv. C202 G 1 conv. C203 Please break my passage into paragraphs like yours but don't rephrase 1 conv. C204 Please comment and the naturalism of the dialogue: Leaning into her touch as her 1 conv. C205 Leaning into her touch as her fingers moved to the tender spot between his earlo 1 conv. C206 Is it interesting that she doesn't take up Liam's proposition to leave but leave 1 conv. C207 Quite natural and effective moments rm Availability) If this app doesn't respond 1 conv. C208 I want to share two passages for comparison in tone and to see if they fit toget 1 conv. C209 As his words dangled on fibrous threading of vulnerable yearning, he edged his f 1 conv. C210 Please write a quick letter to my nephrologist explaining that I want to quit di 1 conv.