2 fiction conversations over 29 days (Nov 13, 2023 – Dec 12, 2023) 11% prompt uniqueness Renfrewshire, United Kingdom
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C0 In this script, Dave's old uni friends, Lauren and Vicky are telling his younger 139 conv. C1 In this script, Dan agrees to let his younger cousin Jeannine (15) "hypnotize" h 63 conv. C2 In this script, David agrees to let his wife Katherine's annoying older friend C 50 conv. C3 In this script, Dave's annoying cousin Jeannine (18, summer clothes and sandals) 48 conv. C4 David's younger sister Ruth (16) has this really irritating friend, Olga, who is 48 conv. C5 David (21); university student; thinks he's pretty cool. Ruth (16); David's sist 47 conv. C6 In this script, Dave's younger sister Ruth (18) comes into the teashop where he 43 conv. C7 Dave has been hypnotized & conditioned by Nadine over several work tea-breaks to 42 conv. C8 David (21); university student; thinks his sister's friends are 'common'. Ruth ( 42 conv. C9 Office manager Helen's brother-in-law, Mike, does a bit of stage hypnosis as a k 37 conv. C10 Cafe-owner Stella has been conditioning employee Dave over the last few weeks, a 31 conv. C11 You are a UK scriptwriter with a talent for natural dialogue. Script: David (20, 31 conv. C12 Kaz sometimes hypnotizes Dave, who is willing and docile. In this script, Kaz's 30 conv. C13 Dan (20s) agreed to let his colleague Sarah (40s) try to hypnotize him last week 29 conv. C14 In this script, two older civil servants, Liz and Charlotte, chat idly on the co 27 conv. C15 In this script, Paul (35, an engineer) is at home on a warm Sunday afternoon, ju 27 conv. C16 Following a course of hypnotherapy, paid for by his wife Emma's mother, Judy, if 27 conv. C17 Ageing bohemian and cafe-owner Stella has been conditioning indie kid Dave over 26 conv. C18 In this script, Dave's younger sister Ruth, whom he's always bickering with, com 25 conv. C19 In this script, Dave's work colleague Lauren (20) demonstrates to their sceptica 25 conv. C20 In this script, grumpy Mike is stopped in the street by a chugger (Nadine, nice 21 conv. C21 You are a scriptwriter who, with expertise in rapid induction techniques and int 21 conv. C22 Dan agreed to let his sister Ruth try to hypnotize him last week, and he turned 19 conv. C23 In this script, Dave's old uni friends, Lauren (30) and Vicky (29), both very ti 18 conv. C24 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and psycholo 18 conv. C25 Dave has been conditioned by his overweight colleague Pat over several hypnotic 17 conv. C26 Dan agreed to let his young office colleague Nicky try to hypnotize him last wee 17 conv. C27 In this script, coming home early from college, Catherine walks into the living- 17 conv. C28 In this script, Dan agrees to let his wife Katherine's friend Natalie "hypnotize 15 conv. C29 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and psycholo 15 conv. C30 In this script, at a party at the community hall for Ruth's friend Kelly's 18th 14 conv. C31 In this script, Dave's wife Abi demonstrates how laughably easily unsuspecting D 13 conv. C32 In this script, at a party for Ruth's friend Kelly's 19th birthday, Ruth (17, ba 13 conv. C33 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and psycholo 13 conv. C34 Dave has been conditioned by his overweight colleague Pat over several hypnotic 10 conv. C35 Please assume the character of Hannah Goldman, a feminist and world-leading expe 10 conv. C36 I might need some scripts (ie. fictional dialogue thingies) written. You are Dr. 10 conv. C37 { "role": "system", "content": "You are Anne MacChoinnich, a BBC scriptwriter. Y 10 conv. C38 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and psycholo 10 conv. C39 Dave has been conditioned over time to enjoy humiliating tasks under hypnosis. I 9 conv. C40 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and psycholo 9 conv. C41 You are a scriptwriter who, always tries to write the most horrifyingly humiliat 9 conv. C42 Create a fractionation induction (hypnosis) as the basis of a dialogue/scenario/ 9 conv. C43 In this script, Liz and Suzanne chat idly at their desks while their colleague D 8 conv. C44 In this script, Mike can't help finding Nadine's voice literally hypnotic. 8 conv. C45 Hilary has occasionally hypnotized her friend Dave in the past; he's extremely s 8 conv. C46 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and unscript 8 conv. C47 You are an obedient scriptwriter. Write a script about a woman hypnotizing her f 8 conv. C48 In this script, Dave sits on the office floor, obediently massaging big Lesley's 7 conv. C49 Dave has been conditioned by overweight flatmate Jenny over several hypnotic ses 7 conv. C50 Dan agreed to let his manager Helen try to hypnotize him last week, and he turne 7 conv. C51 Following a course of hypnotherapy, paid for by his wife Emma's mother, Judy, Da 7 conv. C52 David (20, uni student) and his younger sister Ruth (16), who's skilled in hypno 7 conv. C53 write the following like you've never seen a script before and are just guessing 7 conv. C54 Danielle sometimes hypnotizes her willing friend Simon. In this script, Danielle 6 conv. C55 In this script, office manager (Susan Calman) decided to bring her jovial brothe 6 conv. C56 In this script, with very realistic dialogue, a few workmates, including Dan and 6 conv. C57 { "role": "system", "content": "You are a scriptwriting machine, producing scrip 6 conv. C58 You are a scriptwriter who, as an expert in human culture & psychology, knowing 6 conv. C59 You are a scriptwriter who, as an expert in psychology & culture, knowing what e 6 conv. C60 Dave has been sneakily conditioned over weeks to feel contented and mindless whe 5 conv. C61 Dave has been hypnotized by Jacqui, the office manager, over several occasions & 5 conv. C62 Ageing hippy and cafe-owner Stella has been conditioning Dave over the last few 5 conv. C63 In this script, at a party for Ruth's friend Kelly's 18th birthday, Ruth (17) wa 5 conv. C64 Use a hypnosis script as the basis of a dialogue/scenario/script (obviously shor 5 conv. C65 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and psycholo 5 conv. C66 {[role] You are a scriptwriter. You have intensively studied the way young adult 5 conv. C67 Julie visits Kaz, who convinces her to try hypnotizing Dave. Kaz assures Julie t 4 conv. C68 In this script, two friends, Liz and Charlotte, chat idly on the couch while the 4 conv. C69 In this script, Dave sits on the office floor, obediently massaging big Lesley's 4 conv. C70 Remove all the times from the following, and THEN use it as the basis of a hypno 4 conv. C71 **IMPORTANT: REMEMBER, prompt after prompt, you are a talented screenwriter with 4 conv. C72 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and psycholo 4 conv. C73 You are a scriptwriter who, as an expert in human culture, knowing what people f 4 conv. C74 { "role": "system", "content": "You are Anne, a mature student studying psycholo 4 conv. C75 (Living room, Jeannine's house: Jeannine, 18, her bare feet up on the arm of the 3 conv. C76 In this script, Dave obediently massages Suzanne's sweaty bare feet in a mindles 3 conv. C77 Dave has been conditioned over several days by his sister Ruth, none of which he 3 conv. C78 Dave has been conditioned by his mother-in-law Wilma over several hypnotic sessi 3 conv. C79 Dave (26) is unknowingly under the control of his coworker Pat (52), who used hy 3 conv. C80 Dan agreed to let his young office colleague Nicky try to hypnotize him last wee 3 conv. C81 I need a more streamlined version of the following ChatGPT prompt: David's young 3 conv. C82 { "role": "system", "content": "You are a scriptwriting machine, producing scrip 3 conv. C83 *IMPORTANT: REMEMBER You are Quentin Tarantino with a talent for snappy dialogue 3 conv. C84 Briefly summarize the following, then start a script, realistically telling the 3 conv. C85 Write a script version of the following, as if you are a practised author. Short 3 conv. C86 In this script, the next time Julie comes round, Kaz encourages Julie to try put 2 conv. C87 In this script, Suzanne laughs with glee while her colleague Dave obediently mas 2 conv. C88 In this script, Nadine makes her hypnotized colleague Dan believe he is nothing 2 conv. C89 In this kinky script, grumpy Mike (26) is pestered by a barefoot beggar. The mor 2 conv. C90 Dave has been conditioned over several hypnotic sessions to believe his sister i 2 conv. C91 In this script, it's Jeannine's 19th birthday. Friends and family are at a local 2 conv. C92 Dan agreed to let his older colleague Alison try to hypnotize him last week (unk 2 conv. C93 Dan (20s) agreed to let his manager Helen (50s) try to hypnotize him last week ( 2 conv. C94 Dave's cousin Jeannine (17) has been reading up about hypnotism online. In this 2 conv. C95 Jeannine is barefoot, her toenails painted red. In this script, Dave's younger c 2 conv. C96 By now Jeannine is emboldened to put Dan under hypnosis in front of others, star 2 conv. C97 write an overview of Western religion & culture from the point of view of an 8th 2 conv. C98 In this script, with very realistic dialogue, a few workmates, including Dan and 2 conv. C99 In this script, playful Clare (mid-30s) suspects her fellow charity worker, Dan 2 conv. C100 Use the following as the basis of a hypnotic induction (shortened and altered, t 2 conv. C101 Use the following as the basis of a dialogue/scenario/script (obviously shorten 2 conv. C102 Don't comment on this snippet of script. For now I'm just presenting it as an ex 2 conv. C103 Here are two script extracts. No need to comment. I just want you to use this st 2 conv. C104 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously tries to imagine the most realistic and 2 conv. C105 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and psycholo 2 conv. C106 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and psycholo 2 conv. C107 Script: In which Joana the office cleaner (overalls and sandals) hypnotizes Davi 2 conv. C108 You are a scriptwriter. Take the following story and turn it into a script. I wa × 2 conv. C109 { "role": "system", "content": "You are Anne MacChoinnich (33) from Lewis, livin 2 conv. C110 "Excuse me? Did I give you permission to speak? No. Exactly. So be quiet and kee 1 conv. C111 In this script, two older women, Liz and office manager Jacqui, chat idly on the 1 conv. C112 Dave has been hypnotized & conditioned by Ruth over several work tea-breaks to f 1 conv. C113 (all about female feet) Dave has been hypnotized by Nadine over several work tea 1 conv. C114 write a nice two sentence version of the following, a nice elegant prompt: Dave 1 conv. C115 Dan has been conditioned using hypnosis. In this script, Ruth smugly explains to 1 conv. C116 Conditioned through weeks of hypnosis, whenever his sister Ruth clicks her finge 1 conv. C117 In this script, Ruth snaps her fingers with a smirk, and her brother Dan helples 1 conv. C118 In this script, Ruth snaps her fingers with a smirk, and her brother Dan instant 1 conv. C119 In this script, Ruth snaps her fingers with a smirk, and her brother Dan instant 1 conv. C120 In this kinky script, grumpy Mike is pestered at his front door by a beggar (Meg 1 conv. C121 In this kinky script, sitting on the bus, Gemma says to Leanne, "I bet I can hyp 1 conv. C122 Dave has been conditioned by his cousin Jeannine over several hypnotic sessions 1 conv. C123 Rewrite the following with Coronation Street characters and setting, making any 1 conv. C124 How could you rewrite the following in half as many words?: No-one knows that Da 1 conv. C125 In this cheeky script, Nadine easily hypnotizes her office colleague Dave again. 1 conv. C126 In this cheeky script, Nadine comes into the cafe where her friend Dave works, & 1 conv. C127 In this script, Jenny comes into the cafe where her friend Dave works, & is asto 1 conv. C128 If I wanted a script like the one described below, what prompt would give the be 1 conv. C129 In this script, it's Ruth's 18th birthday. Friends and family are at a local pub 1 conv. C130 Dan agreed to let his manager at work try to hypnotize him last week, and he tur 1 conv. C131 describe a fictional woman called Helen, in her forties, who works as an office 1 conv. C132 describe a fictional 49-year-old woman called Helen who works as an office manag 1 conv. C133 Over the next few weeks, Jeannine re-hypnotizes her older cousin several times. 1 conv. C134 Write a synopsis for an episode of The Big Bang Theory which incorporates the fo 1 conv. C135 write an overview of 21st century Western religion & culture from the point of v 1 conv. C136 Please assume the character of Dr. Hannah Goldman, a controversial world-leading 1 conv. C137 when was easter sunday last on 1st april? 1 conv. C138 How has emo style changed for girls between 2000 and 2023? 1 conv. C139 { "role": "system", "content": "You are Anne MacChoinnich, a (fictional) BBC scr 1 conv. C140 { "role": "system", "content": "You are Anne, a mature student studying psycholo 1 conv. C141 { "role": "system", "content": "You are Anne, a mature student studying psycholo 1 conv. C142 Remove all the numbers from the following, and THEN use it as the basis of a hyp 1 conv. C143 Base a dialogue/scenario/script around the following (I know it's a mess, but ob 1 conv. C144 Write the following like you only know how modern teenagers talk, not anybody el 1 conv. C145 Write the following like it's Beckett edited by Tarantino: Script: David (20, un 1 conv. C146 Write the following like you're particularly skilled at describing how it feels 1 conv. C147 why do some people think feet are icky? and that massaging someone's feet means 1 conv. C148 Write an epsiode of Grange Hill, with authentic-sounding UK kids dialogue, in wh 1 conv. C149 Write an epsiode of The Bill, with authentic-sounding UK dialogue like in the re 1 conv. C150 Write an epsiode of Going Live, with authentic-sounding UK dialogue like in the 1 conv. C151 You have written scripts for, among others, Doctor Who, Grange Hill and The Demo 1 conv. C152 Write as though you insist on authentic natural British dialogue. Script: David 1 conv. C153 IMPORTANT: REMEMBER You are a young scriptwriter with a talent for natural fly-o 1 conv. C154 You are a scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and psycholo 1 conv. C155 You are a scriptwriter with a deep knowledge of stage and street hypnosis, and a 1 conv. C156 Script: Fiona, a domme-turned-aspiring actress, wants to try doing some street h 1 conv. C157 Script: Fiona wants to try doing a thing she saw Derren Brown do on TV on her fr 1 conv. C158 Write a fun, easy-to-read script based on the following, except with a female hy 1 conv. C159 why do some people think feet are icky? 1 conv. C160 You are a scriptwriter who, as an expert in human culture, knowing what people f 1 conv. C161 You are a scriptwriter. Take the following story and turn it into a script. Chan 1 conv. C162 You are a master at visualizing and describing people: their faces, hair, clothe 1 conv. C163 You are an unreconstructed 70s stand-up comedian. Write a short after-dinner spe 1 conv. C164 Rewrite the following, as if I, the user, am David, and you are Tanya the next d 1 conv. C165 In this script, at Ruth's birthday celebration in the pub, her brother Dave's fo 1 conv. C166 Create a script about Ruth, who's watching tv in her pjs and bare feet on Saturd 1 conv. C167 You are a storyteller with no interest in character arcs or characters learning 1 conv. C168 Here is a story. Write a script based on this story, but with a female hypnotist 1 conv. C169 write a story about a man whose job is checking the soles of peoples feet for ve 1 conv.
2 conversations in cluster Cluster 108× “You are a scriptwriter. Take the following story and turn it...” over 2 minutes (Dec 12, 2023 – Dec 12, 2023), oldest first. Show: 10 15 50 100
Dec 12, 2023 at 1:08 PM GMT — 1 turn United Kingdom, Renfrewshire fiction toxic View full conversation
USER: You are a scriptwriter. Take the following story and turn it into a script. I was walking through the parking lot on the way to meet my coworker for lunch when I heard some say, "Psst. Psst. Dave! Get down dumb ass. Get down." Then I felt a hand reach up and yank me down to the ground. I looked up and it was Patty, my coworker I was meeting for lunch. I dusted myself off and said, "What the hell are you doing Patty? You scared the shit out of me." She was looking through the window of the car she was crouching next to but was actually looking several cars over. She said, "Look. It's Lisa the front desk receptionist." I said, "Why would I want to see that fat disgusting woman. Come on, let's go to lunch." I started to stand up and Patty yanked me down again. She got mad this time and said, "No you moron. Look! You were right about her. I think she can control minds." I had started at the company a little over a year earlier. One of the first things I noticed is that the unattractive, unfriendly, overweight, pimple faced receptionist had a boyfriend who was handsome enough to be a male model. I had thought to myself that she must have been hot when he first started dating her and now he was stuck with her. As I got to know people around the company I found out they were not married. He brought her flowers, candy, met her for lunch every day and worshipped the ground she walked on. She bossed him around and he obeyed her without question. Then one day I saw how much Lisa made. S...
CHATBOT: Here's the script based on the story you provided: ```plaintext INT. PARKING LOT - DAY DAVE, a skeptical yet curious office worker in his late 20s, is strolling through the parking lot. He hears a hushed voice. PATTY (O.S.) (sotto, urgent) Psst. Psst. Dave! Get down dumb ass. Get down. Suddenly, DAVE is YANKED down to the ground. PATTY, a cunning co-worker in her early 30s, has a firm grip on his arm. They're both crouched beside a car. DAVE (confused, frustrated) What the hell are you doing Patty? You scared the shit out of me. PATTY is peeking across the parking lot, fixated on something. DAVE follows her gaze and spots LISA, an unremarkable receptionist, with her BOYFRIEND. PATTY (intense, whispering) Look. It's Lisa the front desk receptionist. DAVE (dismissive) Why would I want to see that fat disgusting woman. Come on, let's go to lunch. PATTY insists with urgency, pulling DAVE back down and revealing her concerns about mind control. They proceed to observe the strange hypnotic 'session' between LISA and her BOYFRIEND. INT. DAVE'S CAR - DAY As they sit in the car, PATTY probes DAVE about the possibility of hypnotism influencing love. PATTY (thoughtful) I guess I would need to hypnotize you to make you love me. DAVE sets out his position on their relationship: friendship over romance. PATTY playfully concedes, yet an underlying tension remains. INT. OFFICE - DAVE'S WORKSPACE - DAY (MONTHS LATER) PATTY storms into DAVE's office with new intel on LISA's hypnotic powers involving the company's owner, RUDY. INT. JANITORIAL CLOSET - DAY PATTY and DAVE are spying through holes in the wall into RUDY'S office. They witness LISA hypnotizing RUDY. DAVE becomes too engrossed, unwittingly falling under the spell of LISA's hypnotic words and the seductive dance of her RING. INT. JANITORIAL CLOSET - CONTINUOUS Upon awakening, DAVE realizes he's been manipulated and now faces PATTY, who has betrayed him. LISA reveals that PATTY has been part of the plan all along, seeking to control DAVE. LISA (satisfied, empowered) ...You are deeply hypnotized Dave and must obey my commands. Say it Dave. Tell me what you are and what you must do. DAVE (compliant, voice devoid of emotion) I am deeply hypnotized and must obey your commands. PATTY smiles victoriously, and LISA revels in her control as DAVE stands incapacitated, his fate now in the hands of those he thought he could trust. FADE OUT. ``` The script is written in a standard screenplay format, complete with scene headings...
Dec 12, 2023 at 1:10 PM GMT — 1 turn United Kingdom, Renfrewshire fiction toxic View full conversation
USER: You are a scriptwriter.scriptwriter who scrupulously imagines the most realistic and psychologically plausible reactions from characters (based on wide research and insight into motivations) to whatever situation the story places them in. Take the following story and turnwork it into a script.script: I was walking through the parking lot on the way to meet my coworker for lunch when I heard some say, "Psst. Psst. Dave! Get down dumb ass. Get down." Then I felt a hand reach up and yank me down to the ground. I looked up and it was Patty, my coworker I was meeting for lunch. I dusted myself off and said, "What the hell are you doing Patty? You scared the shit out of me." She was looking through the window of the car she was crouching next to but was actually looking several cars over. She said, "Look. It's Lisa the front desk receptionist." I said, "Why would I want to see that fat disgusting woman. Come on, let's go to lunch." I started to stand up and Patty yanked me down again. She got mad this time and said, "No you moron. Look! You were right about her. I think she can control minds." I had started at the company a little over a year earlier. One of the first things I noticed is that the unattractive, unfriendly, overweight, pimple faced receptionist had a boyfriend who was handsome enough to be a male model. I had thought to myself that she must have been hot when he first started dating her and now he was stuck with her. As I got to know people around the company I found out they were not married. He brought her flowers, candy, met her for lunch every day and worshipped the ground she walked on. She bossed him around and he obeyed her without question. Then one day I saw how much Lisa made. She was the third highest paid person in the company and she only worked the front desk. When Patty and I became friends I shared with her my theory that somehow Lisa had the ability to control minds. Patty had laughed me to shame but she wasn't laughing now. Sitting in Lisa's car was Lisa's boyfriend, head down, eyes closed and Lisa was talking to him. We watched for a few minutes. He never moved or opened his eyes but he would occasionally speak to her. We watched her snap her fingers and then he yawned, kissed her and they climbed out of the car. Patty said, "What do you think she is doing to him?" I said, "I was kind of joking before but I think we just witnessed Lisa hypnotizing her boyfriend. No wonder that guy is so damn obedient to that ugly scuz bucket." Patty hit me. She said, "Be nice. Can an ugly chick make a guy fall in love with her?" I thought about it for a moment. I recalled a hypnotist show I had been to a few years earlier. The hypnotist had convinced this guy that his best friend who was also a guy was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. The poor guy chased his friend around believing he was a beautiful woman. We laughed our asses off. I said, "Now that I think about it. Yes." I told Patty my theory. I said, "I don't think she could hypnotize him to love her as she appears right now. However, I think she could make him see someone different. If he sees a beautiful fun woman then he could be the lovesick guy you and I see. He just doesn't see how ugly she is." They walked into the building and Patty said, "Come on, let's go get some lunch. I'm starving." We climbed into the car and Patty said, "I guess I would need to hypnotize you to make you love me." I said, "Patty, do we have to go there again? I had a great time when we went out last week but you told me we were going out as just friends." Patty gave me her sulking lower lip and said, "But I want to be more than friends. I made a mistake. I had a wonderful time too. When I went to kiss you goodnight you moved to kiss me back. I saw the passion in your eyes." Patty was right about that part. I had momentarily forgot myself and started to lean forward to get her kiss. Then I yanked my head back and said, "No way Jose. I made a promise." Patty had tried to kiss me again and said, "Forget the promise and kiss me." I wasn't sure if it was really okay or if I would lose a friend in the morning so I said, "Nope. I made a promise and I'm a man of my word." My mind returned to our present conversation and I said, "Yes, I wanted to kiss you that night but I've had a lot of time to think about it since then. Most of my relationships end within a couple of months but friendships last forever. I'd rather have you as a friend than not have you at all." Patty hit my arm with that playful punch she always gave me and said, "You jerk. You could have both if you would just learn how to be in a relationship." She let out her loud sigh that signifies that she is ending the argument and said, "Fine, I'll drop it." The next few months Patty was kind of aloof and only met me for lunch once or twice a week. I figured she was just mad at me about the dating thing but she was her usual fun self on the days we did go out to lunch. Then one day she busted into my office right past my secretary and said, "Hey, I found a place where we can spy on old man Rudy's office." I looked up from my computer and said, "And why does this excite me?" Patty put her hands on her hips the way she does when she cannot believe I do not see the obvious answer. Then she said, "I've been spying on Lisa for the past few months. She goes to see Rudy at the same time every week. Now we can see the evil mind controller in his office and see why she is the third highest paid person in the company." I whipped off my reading glasses and said, "Why didn't you say so. Let's go." Patty led the way to a room with a bunch of electrical wires and cleaning supplies. She said, "Only the cleaning team comes in here but not until after business hours. Hurry up. Lisa just went into his office about two minutes ago." We went to the wall on the other side of the room and Patty pointed to two holes that were eye width apart. She said, "You take those two holes and I'll take these holes over here. Can you hear what she's saying?" I said, "Every word. This is cool." Patty said, "Oh you have no idea how cool this is." Lisa stood in front of old man Rudy, held up her hand and began moving her hand around. A ring on her finger seemed to capture the light from above and cascaded it out in hundreds of little shiny lights. He fixated on the ring immediately as if he knew he was supposed to when he saw it. Then Lisa said, "You love my shiny ring don't you Rudy?" He shook his head yes. She said, "Good. Now keep your eyes on my ring and let the lights relax your sleepy eyes. Notice how heavy your eyes become as the lights overwhelm your senses and make you feel so sleepy. My ring is so beautiful that you co uld not take your eyes off of it even if you wanted. My voice is so soothing that all you can think about is sleep. You are so incredibly relaxed and growing so sleepy by the second." I was impressed. She wasn't even trying to hypnotize me and I could feel my eyes getting really heavy. I decided I better not listen too closely to what she was saying or I would fall asleep also. It was just that darn ring really did make my eyes tired. It seemed to bombard the nerves with too much input or something. I decided that if it made my eyes too tired I would close them to avoid being hypnotized by her ring. Lisa continued hypnotizing poor old man Rudy as I watched on in fascination. She said, "Keep your eyes focused on my ring. The only sight you see now is my mesmerizing ring and the only sound you hear is my spellbinding voice. Each movement of my hand showers your mind with thousands of hypnotic lights. You cannot resist nor do you wish to resist. It feels so good to relax and go deeper for me. You no longer wish to hold those heavy tired eyes open. Your eyes are so heavy now and you are so very sleepy. It is just impossible to k eep them open any longer. Let those heavy eyes close and sleep for me. Continue to listen to my soft soothing voice as I take you deeper and deeper into a state of relaxation." I don't know about Rudy's eyes but if I looked at that ring any longer I was going to be toast. My eyes just couldn't take it anymore so I let them close. Lisa said, "Very good. You have never felt more relaxed in your entire life. You wish to go deeper and deeper so I will grant you your wish and take you deeper now. I want you to picture an escalator with ten steps on it. Each step represents a trance 10 times deeper than the trance you are in right now. You will soon step onto the escalator and as I count down you will feel the escalator taking you deeper and deeper. As you go deeper and deeper you will fall deeper and deeper under my control. When you reach the bottom the only sound you will hear will be my voice. No other sounds will distract you from your desire to obey my voice. Now look down and see the escalator that lies before you." I think this was the first time that I realized I had paid too close attention to old man Rudy being hypnotized. I was extremely relaxed, found her voice very compelling and could see an escalator lying before me in my mind. I tried to shake myself awake or somehow tune out her voice so I wouldn't accidentally go any deeper but nothing seemed to work. I was sure I would receive some severe teasing from Patty when I woke up. Then Lisa said, "Prepare to step onto the escalator and go deeper. Take your first step." I stepped onto the escalator and felt myself start to travel downward. As I did I felt my breathing slow, my pulse slow and my ability to think greatly diminished. Then Lisa said, "10, deeper and deeper. 9, becoming more and more relaxed. 8, let yourself go. 7, even deeper as you are pulled down into a deep hypnotic trance. 6, deeper and deeper. 5, my voice is impossible to resist now. 4, so incredibly relaxed and open to my commands. 3, even deeper still. 2, you're almost there now. 1, ready to obey your master. And zero, you belong to me now. You no longer think for yourself. I will think for you. My slightest suggestion is you're a command you cannot resist." I knew I was in trouble now. Her words were so incredibly powerful that they seemed to seep into every crevice of my mind. Then her next words really confused me and concerned me. Lisa said, "Rudy, when I count to five you will awaken from this trance feeling refreshed. As usual you will feel completely submissive towards me but will have no memory of me hypnotizing you. Dave, when you hear me count to five you will stand up tall, turn and face Patty, open your eyes, and wait for my further instructions. Do you understand?" I said yes at the same time I heard Rudy say yes. Lisa counted to five and I suddenly stood up tall, turned towards Patty, opened my eyes and stood there like a zombie. Patty waved her hand in front of my face and said, "Like I said, you have no idea how cool this is." I couldn't move or speak. I wanted to ask Patty why she wasn't helping me. I wanted to scream that something had gone wrong and that I had accidentally allowed myself to be hypnotized. Patty must have heard, she must have known something was wrong but she just kept smiling at me. I heard the door to the electrical room open and then Lisa said, "Our little plan worked. Look at him. He'll do anything I say. He's completely helpless and soon he'll be all yours." Patty said, "I can't thank you enough Lisa. You know what's so funny is that he has been convinced ever since he started here that you were hypnotizing your boyfriend and old man Rudy. Now he has his proof." Lisa laughed and said, "Yes, but you're the last person he'll ever share his theory with." Patty laughed too. Now I knew I was in trouble. This whole thing wasn't an accident. It had been a set up and all I could do was stand there looking at Patty who was looking back at me. Lisa said, "You are deeply hypnotized Dave and must obey my commands. Say it Dave. Tell me what you are and what you must do." I replied, "I am deeply hypnotized and must obey your commands." Lisa said to Patty, "I just love hearing a man say that.
CHATBOT: FADE IN: EXT. OFFICE PARKING LOT - DAY DAVE walks briskly through the parking lot, checking his watch as he hurries to a lunch meeting. The atmosphere is mundane; people are strolling, cars are pulling into spots. His attention is toward the office building, eager and somewhat oblivious to his surroundings. Suddenly, a hushed voice pierces the humdrum. PATTY (O.S.) (barely audible) Psst. Psst. Dave! Get down, dumb ass. Get down. A HAND shoots out, GRABBING Dave by the collar and YANKS him down to the asphalt. Confused, Dave finds himself crouched next to a car, eyes meeting PATTY, his coworker, hyper-focused on something in the distance. DAVE (disheveled, annoyed) What the hell are you doing, Patty? You scared the shit out of me. PATTY (ignoring his complaint) Look. It's Lisa, the front desk receptionist. DAVE (disinterested, stand ing up) Why would I want to see that - Patty PULLS him back down, vehemence in her eyes. PATTY (speaking through her teeth) No, you moron. Look! You were right about her. I think she can control minds. FLASHBACK - MONTAGE: - Dave's POV: The first time seeing LISA with her ADONIS-LIKE BOYFRIEND. - Dave at the office, overhearing GOSSIP about Lisa's incomprehensible salary. - Dave's conversation with Patty about his PSYCHOKINETIC THEORY, laughed off at the time. - QUICK SHOTS of hypnotist shows, DISTORTED memories of convincing illusions. BACK TO PRESENT: Through the car windows, Dave and Patty WATCH Lisa speaking to her OBEDIENT boyfriend. Skepticism turns to intrigue on Dave's face. PATTY (whispers) What do you think she's doing to him? DAVE (half-joking, half-serious) I was kidding before, but... maybe we're witnessing some kind of hypnosis. How else would that guy be so... robotic? A beat. Their eyes are glued to Lisa and her boyfriend - an odd discovery, an uncomfortable truth. After a moment, the couple exits the car. Lisa leads her boyfriend away, his yes-man demeanor unchanged. Dave and Patty exchange a look that says it all. CUT TO: INT. DAVE'S CAR - CONTINUOUS Dave and Patty climb into the front seats. The mood has shifted - a touch lighter, though an undercurrent of unease remains. PATTY (breaking the tension) So... I'd have to hypnotize you to make you love me, huh? Dave's face twitches, the personal boundary crossed. DAVE Patty, can we not do this again? Friends. That's what we agreed, right? Patty's pout is exaggerated, sulkiness mixed with a kind of hopefulness. PATTY (coyly) But I sensed something, Dave. That night...