USER: Act as abeta reader for this part of a much larger story, do characters seem aurthentic, is the discrition detailed enough, potencual plot wholes ect: The afternoon of the major emergency conference, called at Freight Command in New York, to discuss the situation with the prince, was due to begin, in just a few hours. The shuttle landing area outside Freight Command for the last few hours was the busiest it has been, for some time. Various delegates from the parties involved had arrived, and at 15:22 PM, the shuttle from Tam Stone Cylinder carrying Captain McConnell arrived. Waiting on the pad, 23-year-old Estelle White, an airy young woman, charged with pad operations, met Captain McConnell. The pad was a busy, noisy place. The lift engines of the arriving and departing shuttlecraft created strong winds. 'Good afternoon, Fleet Captain' Estelle said, struggling to be herded and almost getting blown over; McConnell moving quickly prevented her fall. 'White, are you alright?' You've got to be more careful, ok? said McConnell, who White could just about hear over the sound on the pad. White pointed to a quieter area, and McConnell nodded her agreement. Stepping through a sliding automatic metal door that made a satisfying hiss in operation, White and McConnell entered the Pad Operations Center. This was where shuttlecraft got permission to land and take off, and they executed other operational matters. Its technology was a little dated and looked like they had forgotten it in so...

USER: Are there any aeras that need clarifercation